by Edeyn Hannah Blackeney
Voices.
Hushed, but definitely talking.
There's a few whoosh-klump noises, too. I think I'm in hospital. I think I'll open my eyes, get a good look around, ask folks what's going on.
Ack. That's a lot of light for a tiny crack open. Didn't even part my eyelashes.
Whoa.
I must be pretty messed up, because trying -- and failing -- to open my eyes just wore me out. Maybe I'll have a look around later... right after I take a nap.
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Comments
Seems like interesting
Seems like interesting begining of story. Will there be more?
Robin
WOW
You said so many things on so many levels! The more I think about it, the more levels I see.
Thank you,
Anne
Wow...
so little written, so much said and created. That's skill.
Bailey Summers
A really nice piece that
A really nice piece that feels like it is about the aftermath of coming out rather than the preamble to a story of doing such. Nicely done.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.