Captain, Oh My Captain is pure TG and straight from my heart. I left it needing a bit of editing because I wanted to present a woman who was not quite coherent much of the time. I wanted to preserve the disorderly thinking.
So those who are tempted to pull the edit sword, be careful what you toy with.
It is my hope that both my fans will enjoy this glimpse into the mind of a crazed woman.
Khadija Gwen
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May be I can give people tours of mine some day. There are things in there which makes my therapist shutter. Sigmund would give up and retire. Maybe if I could find a person part Escher and part Jung they could be my curator's.
Your story is great and conveyed very well what you were trying to bring across.
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With those with open eyes the world reads like a book
Shukran Gazillian
This just sprang out of the darkest recesses of my mind around 11:00 PM. It was a partially written story. It felt like my depraved muse had me in a painful hammer lock and was not going to let go until it was hot off the press. :)
Khadija Gwen
Good Bye
Just looking at my blinding success with "Captain, Oh My Captain", it is clear that I have no idea what people here want. If it is what it seems, I will not write that way.
It's been nice knowing some of you. Off to other things now. I won't be answering PM's or anything. I'll be back later to remove my stories. Erin if you see this, please just get rid of them.
Gwen
I thought it was pretty good.
And it shows a side realistic human reaction that is often lacking in many stories here.
I read "Captain, Oh My Captain" and started following links to your other stories, I guess I won't bother now, since they likely to vape as I work my way through them. I will take a peek in a week or so and see if you changed your mind. I hope you do.
There is so much on BC that it is not really feasible to read everything, often my choices are somewhat random.
Anyway, I wish you the best of luck in everything wherever you may go!
(whether you see this or not)
Take care of your self.
*waves bye bye as she slowly flutters off,
emitting a little less pixie dust then usual*
~Hypatia >i< .::
PS. If you are truly leaving the site, I will miss your smiling face among the replies & comments.