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Marina Kelly and I have developed a final chapter for our story 'Womanless Beauty Pageant'.
To lead into it a bit more logically, we made some changes to chapter 11. I don't think that you will necessarily need to read it for chapter 12 to make sense, but enough of you have read chapter 11 that I wanted to make you aware that it has been changed a little.
Thank you,
Monica.
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The Major Problem I Had
... was that the ending seemed a bit abrupt. On the othr hand, I accepted that because that is what the authors wanted to do. It is not their job to satisfy all the readers.
Portia
If you feel this makes the story better, easier to read...
and understand, go for it.
But ultimately your baby. Your rules.
Thanks for the FYI.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa