Thanks

Well, I'd really like to get up and thank all the folks you decided to take the time in PMing me and leaving detail criticisms. Sephrena especially should be given a big round of applause as she's the one that got the ball rolling. I was feeling pretty down because I wasn't getting many comments, and I'm actually feeling a lot better now. There were some comments that made me rethink things, but overall most people did seem to enjoy the story which is really what I like to hear. And for future reference, if ever anyone feels the need to PM me and offer up detailed criticism you're more than welcome to. That being said messages that are out and out confrontational or rude will very likely be ignored.

A few things

Now there are a few things that I'd like to talk about, but really couldn't justify posting as a blog on their own.

Part 5 of Destiny is here, I actually realized today I'd made another flub in regards to part 4. I left a pretty big chunk (about 1600 words) off the end of it so that portion was added to the beginning of part 5.

Also, a lot of people have probably noticed that part 4 and 5 have a new image in the summary. Maggie Finson was a big help in this regard as she provided me a link to the site where the image was found.

Well, that's it for now.

So long and thanks for all the fish,

D.A.W.