I was looking over my stories, like I do, and I noticed that I had no comments for College Girl 3 and 4. This makes me sad. While I am aware that some chapters have only 1 comment, these two are sad and lonely, wasting away for want of a comment, some sort of love or recognition, it is heart breaking... All I can hear now is those poor chapters crying out in their loneliness and privation. I cannot hear any other story because of their lamentations. OH THE HUMANITY!!
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well, we cant have that, can we?
provide a link, and I'm sure some kind soul will rectify that situation
You're gonna have to be more helpful here.
OK, well I finally found "College Girl lurking deep in the bottom level of your archives where the snails and albino insects lurk. You have two problems. First, you have two names, so that makes double trouble in remembering your writing. I have to say that you won me over as a fan of your writing in "300 Rains". Prior to that, not so much, and why I do not know. In your lament blog, you should put a link so that the less determined of us can find the story.
So, I only knew I had not read it because when I clicked the kudo button, it said thank you. :) Also, I rarely comment on every chapter of anything unless it is some thing like "50 Shades of Grey" which just plugs me in like a drakian mind probe. So, maybe I will comment, and um maybe I won't. :) Gosh, I need a spanking right now; my twisted little mind tells me so.
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OH, here damnit ! http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/3624/college-girl-1 And NO, I am not your mother!
Thanks for the link. I had
Thanks for the link. I had totally spaced on that one. OH THE HUGE MANATEE!... wait... I said that wrong... oops...
No I get the thing with why my writing shifted because I can see it clearly myself. If I rewrote this now it would be a very different story with some different effects because I had learned so much about writing. I started this story in 1997. I have gotten a touch better in the few days since then.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
What's wrong? Floundered?
What's wrong? Floundered? Blew a seal?
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
Hey man... stay out of my
Hey man... stay out of my private life!
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Oh, quit the carping!
Oh, quit the carping!
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
That one just smelt.
That one just smelt. Honestly, it's like you are trolling the scales to find something to get me crabby.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
You had to work hard to
You had to work hard to dredge that up, didn't you? Oh, the depths to which you will sink!
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
You couldn't begin to fathom
You couldn't begin to fathom the depths I would plumb for these. But we should stop, these are giving me a haddock and I need to lie down. Sorry, I can't kelp it.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Kelp it?
Kelp it, help it, or even scalp it (if that's the way you swing, I guess).. It's all good. You just enjoy your lay-down and let us enjoy your stories. ^_^
Peace be with you and Blessed be
Thank you Heather
I had forgotten you had written that story(I first read it over on ficitonmanaia I think) And loved it. I know what I'll be rereading soon. Thank you for reminding me as it's one of your best stories. Not quite as awesome as Chou/bladedancer but still very close :D.
Yeah... this is one of this
Yeah... this is one of this earliest stories of this length that I had written. It got me through a really tough time in training when a DI was trying to get me booted out of the Army. That's why I kind of have a big soft spot for this story. She just really gives me a warm fuzzy.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Oh the Humanity!!
DRAMA QUEEN! LOL!!
May Your Light Forever Shine