For those of you who were waiting

for the story to be complete. The draft is done and the story will be posted until complete. For what is getting posted here, it is complete. People's reactions, comments, and messages have all given me some great ideas on how to fill the story out. There is sure to be more stuff for both Asche and Nibs, more on the Morri, more of everything. But that is a next draft thing. I really like the story and think its fun, so once the second draft is done and edited I will probably submit it to Tor. Thanks to all the thumbs up, I feel like it might actually have a chance with a more serious publisher.

Thanks for the help and enjoy the rest of the first draft.