Honestly, I messed up.
I uploaded Chapter Four and the more I looked at it realized that it was not finished. So, I took some time today to upload more to make it better
I'm sorry for the people that read it this morning and missed the second half.
Oh, well.
I could have added a "Chapter Five" but it just seemed more important to finish Chapter Four.
I'll get it all smoothed out eventually.
Comments
it happens, hon
don't beat yourself up about it
thank you, Dorothy
Dorothy,
You certainly are right. But, for some reason, Chapter Four was just lacking so much. As I though about it, well, I realized that Chapter Five really should be part of Chapter Four. So, I did that.
I'm just sorry for the eight hundred people who read Chapter Four without the extra pages. They are going to wonder what they missed when they finally read the new Chapter Five
Author's note
Put an author's note at the beginning of chapter 5 that chapter 4 has been reworked with added scenes and advise those who read it to reread the last X number of words or paragraphs.
Hugs
Patricia
Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper in femineo gerunt
Ich bin ein femininer Mann