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Just an apology for the fact my latest piece is so short. I kept hoping I could expand it, but I was seriously stuck, and my muse kept wanting to work on this other piece based on my dream instead. So I figured I'd put it out there, and hopefully if there is interest I'll add to it or make a sequel or something, assuming my muse lets me.
At least I'm writing again, so there is that ...
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The story is the right length
I assume you are referring to https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/70086/myth-ing-witch-.... The story is the right length for what the plot covers. Thanks for writing it.
Didn't Mind the Length...
But it seems to me that the whole story (after the intro explaining the magic system) seemed to be the narrator's recap of things that already happened, as though we were leading up to something that was about to happen now -- and then nothing did.
Eric
Nothing happened here
because it happened in Chapters 1 and 2. You will find Sabrina mentioned in https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/69341/secret-myth-cha...