Just came up with this little snippet of a story and wanted to share.

The Encounter
My guest had gone to clean up, so I went to the kitchen to make us some food, but before I could finish, I heard a scream coming from the bathroom.

I walked over to it, and when there was another scream, I tried the door.

Fortunately, my guest had not locked it, so I went in to find her cowering in a corner, naked, and pointing at the shower.

I looked, and I saw a ball of black smoke by the ceiling. It looked like a small thundercloud, except it had red eyes and a large mouth, which I could see had fangs when it opened its mouth to hiss at me.

“What do you think you are doing, scaring my guest!“ I shouted at it, “Back down the pipes with you, shoo!“

The creature hissed at me again, and then poured itself up the showerhead, and soon the room was bright again.

“What was that?“ My guest asked.

“Shower monster“ I replied with a shrug, “It won't bother you again“

Then I left the bathroom.

What do you guys think?