"Gordon!"
"That you Gordon?"
"Hey Gordon!"
Melissa growled as she rushed down the hallway towards the school's rear- and mostly unused- exit.
Why had she agreed to do this again? 'Great prank,' he said. 'Lots of fun,' he said. 'Twenty bucks,' he said. Oh, the joys of having a twin.
She pushed her way through the doors to find her brother there waiting in her favorite skirt and blouse, with a green look on his face.
"Uh, sis, did you know you cheerleaders had physicals today?" He asked nervously...
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Oh, oh!
Rasufelle, that was good. I laughed and laughed. Nice work!
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In my footprints wash the sea; from my hands flow our universe.
Fact and fiction sing a legendary song.
Trickster/Creator are its divine verse.
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Cute
I'm not so sure the pun works as well in this one, unless you're suggesting that Gordon's problem is going to be solved by cutting something open? (Eep!)
It's sad, I know.
My drabbles usually start with a title or opening line, and I just kind of improvize from there. In this case, I was thinking about Gordian knots, and the pun came up, so I ran with it. I was more interested in the idea of the female to male mixup for this one anyhow, it's something I haven't done before, and probably won't do again. Call me biased, but I prefer to read it the other way around:)
Melanie E.
Cheerleader Physical? Oh My!! :-)
No wonder he's green.
May Your Light Forever Shine
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