Jack's Little Adventure

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Jack's Little Adventure

This is a nice tale about a boy by the name Jack Star.

Chapter 1. A messy day
Jack would be your normal guy, he is lazy he does not shower often and just is a danger for himself and with his friends, jack is at the age of 12 he is a trouble kid and likes to mess around we can say,
In other hands he had a mother and 2 sisters and a dad that is always working and never around, his sisters and his mother was extremely tired of what jack was doing and was tired seeing him come home bruised up and smelling bad. Jack enjoyed his life and what he loved to do was gang up with his friends and try to fight other groups in there little city, there was just one problem jack was really short and by standers would mistake him as a kindergartener extremely often, they would try to drag him out of these fights and even try to see if they could find his parents since It’s not safe for someone that small to be in a full on brawl against another group of guys.
Jack hated it when I was picked on for being a short guy and really hated that others mistook him for being a young child, one day Mrs star had gotten a phone call about jack he had gotten in yet another fight with some random group that his friends had beef with and was making a fuss at the hospital after 4 guys from his friends group had gotten there ass handed to them during the fight, while his friends was handled by the normal area of the hospital since they were a lot bigger then jack was in appearance and height, jack was taken to the place for the youngest kids where they where treating him like he was 4,
Mrs star was furious to hear that he had been in another fight and had even promised her mother that he would try to avoid fighting with his friends after the last incidence, where jack had gotten a broken bone she would tell the nurses that had called her that she was on her way to pick him up and that they should keep him where he is, they did ask for his age and since his mother was so mad she had told them he was 12 but they where welcome to treat him as he was much younger while she was on her way.
The nurses would look over at little jack that was sitting in a char with a massive pout on his face while hearing that they had called his mother and that he was going to get so much shit out of all of this, the nurses in the other hand would have a nice little smile on their faces while they would walk over to him and crouches down to him smiling, jack would feel a chill going down his spine while he looks at the nurses they would introduce themselves as Mrs Daniel and Mrs Peterson they would tell him that he looks like a little precious boy and say’s it’s bad for someone so young as he was to try to fight boys much older and bigger then he was.

Mrs. Daniel: Jack we have talked to your mommy and she is on her way right now to pick you up, and we believe that it’s bad for someone your size and age to be playing so roughly with boys much older and bigger then what you are
Jack looked at her thinking hard, the hell is this woman talking about I’m like the same age as them?!
Jack: ma’am I think you must be confused I’m 12 I can hold myself in a fight just fine and my friends are like the same age as me.
The 2 ladies would giggle at him saying that he was a little cute and kept telling him that fighting is not a good thing and nether is it a thing for little boys to be doing. A little later there would be some knocking on the door as one of the nurses walks over to the door and opens it, Jack would just look down at the floor hopping so hard that it would not be his mother but another doctor or something in that area, but sadly for him he could hear his mothers voice and felt his soul trying to leave his body.
One of the nurses took jacks hand and walks over to the door then leads him over to him mother, he would look up at him and in everyone else’s eyes his mother looks happy but for him he saw death in her eyes, she would grab jacks hand with a tight grip and thanked Mrs Daniel and Mrs Peterson for the nice help they did for her son as she walks away with jack.

Jack: mom I can explain, me and the gang was just hanging around town and then these guys came out of no where and started trying to fight us and was shit talking us in our faces.

Mrs Star would cut him off in his excuse and attempt to get out of trouble
Mrs star: and didn’t you tell me that you where not going to be in fights anymore didn’t you promise me that you where going to be a good boy and stay away from trouble and walk away if your friends started fighting other boys!!
Jack tried to speak but just shut up walking out of the building and to his mothers car, she would strap him in his car seat in the back of the car and smacks the door close, it was a quiet drive home while he wanted to talk but felt that it would just get worst if he tried, a 15 min drive later and the car would stop Infront of the house where his sisters would be standing outside waiting with the biggest shit eating grin on there faces, it would take a while before jack got out of the car and walked with his mother back while his older sisters would be laughing at him

(his sisters names are Mira who is 17 and Bella who is 15)
Mira: looks like someone has gotten into a fight again even after you promised mom that you would stay out of trouble. She would giggle at her younger brother and was looking forward for what would happen to him.
Bella on other hand was just happy to see that he hadn’t been badly hurt standing next to her sister smiling at jack while he was taken inside the house and placed on the couch, jack had to sit there while his mother made some calls, Jacks head was a mess her was scared that she was going to call his dad and if his dad found out he lied to his mom about not fighting he was so going to get an ass beating for this.

Chapter 2. The Unwanted change
Jack was sitting on the couch dreading what would happen next, would his dad come home or would he have his games taken away from him or even worst what if he would get no more snacks, sadly for jack what would happen next was far worst then he would think as his mother would get off the phone with a smile looking over at jack

Mrs. star: Jack I got some good news for you, I just got off the phone with your aunt and she has agreed to let you transfer to her private school in the next town over.
Jack would feel as if time would have stopped hearing those words while he turns pale looking at his mother.
(ok some background story of the school, it’s an all-girl school really fancy and is heavily guarded the reason why it reacted as he did is he knew there would be no escaping that place and how would he even fit in he is a 12 year old boy that already could be mistaken for a child but he also has a bit longer hair then normal since he hate cutting his har, it’s really boring and takes much time while he can’t do anything now back to the school, the school was full of rich girls and was the classy style of school you had to live at the school and there was a stick policy around boys there they would normally never be allowed on the school ground and would have to stay outside the gates if they were to visit family, but the worst part was that her aunt was the owner and principal of the school, now lets get back to the story and the poor fate of our boy jack)
Jack: mom that school is for only girls and I’m a boy I would never get through the first gate
Mrs. Star: don’t worry your aunt has made all the arrangements and they are picking you up in 30 mins so what I want you to do is go to your room and gets some of your stuff ready but no clothes.
Jack did what his mother told him and walked to his room but didn’t know what to get since how can he move somewhere without any clothes this is all madness, this has to be a joke no way his mother would send him off to an all-girl school, jack would end up sitting down on the bed doing nothing when he heard someone ringing the door bell and hear a unfamiliar voice asking if he was ready, Mrs Star would call for him to come down while he would just get his phone and charger thinking this was all just a stupid joke.
Jack came down to the door and looked this lady standing there smiling at him and asked if he was ready to go, maybe this wasn’t a joke after all since this is getting bad, Jacks mother Mr’s Star would look around jack seeing he had nothing but his phone with him and sighs claiming she will be right back with some of his stuff as she walked to the bathroom and his room, while the lady introduces herself to jack as Mrs Jackson.
Mrs. Jackson: hello there jack I will be one looking over you at the Sant rose all girl school, my name is Kailyn and I believe we will get along just wonderfully, also may I say you are quite cute for being a little boy.
Jack would be screaming inside his head seeing his life falling apart at this moment, like this can’t be happening and if this is a joke I hope they are going to tell me soon because I feel like I’m about to piss my pants, Jack would be looking around for his mother hoping she would jump out to tell him it was all just a joke but she never did because she had returned with a back pack for him with some stuff of his while Mr’s Jackson would grab his hand and lead him out the door to this big fancy car it was a Rolls-Royce Cullinan, it looked really expensive while Mrs Jackson would place him in the backseat and gets in the front seat herself and his mother and sister where waving out the room as the car starts diving,
Jack was fully lost how has him getting into a fight gotten him into so much trouble like serious it was a small fight he knew he lied to his mother but being sent of like that and so quickly it was like his entire life was turned upside down in just a few hours then he would hear Mr’s Jackson start to talk while he was a state of shock.
Mrs. Jackson: don’t you worry little one this will be a lot of fun I bet you will be making lots of friends and will have a great time at the Sant’s row Rose and your aunt cant wait to see you again she was so happy when your mother called her and is going to make sure you will enjoy this all.
Jack looks at her then speaks himself,
Jack: but Kaitlyn I’m a boy and mom didn’t even let me bring any clothes plus the last time I heard about the school they say’s that boys wasn’t allowed on the school grounds and what will I be wearing if I can’t bring any of my own clothes?
Mrs. Jackson would giggle while she kept on driving and would just say that everything will be explained when we would get, at this point jack would just look out the window seeing that they had left the city and was driving past forests and nice landscapes till in the distance he could see this monster of an area it was almost like a city by it self walled of from anyone else jack was speechless seeing the size of the place and it just got bigger and bigger the closer they would get.
Jack: t-this place is huge I knew it was a big school, but this is madness it’s like an entire city.
Jack would almost get out of his seat looking at this monster of a school as they approach this massive gate where there only ladies working at, Katlyn would tell them that she was transporting a new student for the school and called jack a tomboy that needs to learn the way of a lady, jack did not like this and attempted to open the car door to see if he would be able to run he sees that Kaitlyn had child safety on to make sure he wasn’t going anywhere, the car would pass through the gate and outside he would see so many cute girls all wearing the school uniform (I’ll get in more detail of the uniform later)
The car would get a lot of attention seeing it was late in the year and no one would thing they would get a new transfer student this late in the year but luckily for jack the windows where tinted so no one would see him inside the car while it would move slowly over to the main building, but the horror was just bringing as Kaitlyn would stop the car and turns around to where jack was then started fixing his hair stating that this was necessary before leaving the car she would get some pink lipstick from her purse and puts it nicely on his lips after that she would get out some black mascara and rose gold eye shadow, jack hated this since he never liked make up it looked stupid and was stupid in his mind.
After she was done she would show himself in the mirror and ofc with the har fixed and the make up a looked like a little girl but at least his clothes had his boyish touch still making him a cute little tomboy with a small lady’s touch, Katlyn would finally take the child safely of the car off while she gets out herself and opens the car door for him and unstraps him from the car seat, jack would get out all looks around seeing all the girls and the devil herself his aunt Mrs Sasha Redrose but before he could react he was swarmed by other girls from the school all wanted to see the new transfer student and his aunt let them get a good look at him they would be giggling saying that she was a cutie and that cute little girls shouldn’t be wearing boy clothes but pretty little dresses, jack did try to explain that he was a boy but they all just giggled and didn’t believe a work a say’s, that’s where his aunt stepped in and picked him up as he was just a toddler almost while jack would have the most defeated look on his face.
Mrs. Redrose: ladies ladies calm down let me introduce you all to my niece Jessica and as you can see she is a bit of a tomboy and was sent here with use by her mommy to learn how to be a lady like yourself so I hope you will help her out and be nice to her and I know that she isn’t wearing the right clothes we will fix that later.
Jack but now Jessica would look at his aunt horrified for what she had just said and looks at the girls around them but it was better if he didn’t act out now he already knows what could happen if he did so in his defeated state he would just hug her aunt like a good little girl, his/her aunt would smile and told the girls that she was tired after her long travel and would probably need a nap so she would walk back into the building with Mrs Jackson while carrying little Jessica in her hands, she would walk to an elevator that would take her up the building to her office (like this place is huge and Morden Jessica/Jack was sure he had seen a shopping mall down the street when he entered the gate but back to the story) when they arrived at the office she would place poor jack down on a chair and looks down at him while sweet Mrs Jackson would wait by the door for them to talk.
Jack: Aunt Sasha why did you tell them my name was Jessica and that I was a little girl, I’m a boy and big boy not a little girl!
Mrs Redrose: would giggle a bit, you don’t look much like a boy with that cute make up and your hair made all cute, and I talked to your mother and she told me you had been lying and getting into fights so we both believed sending you here with me and the girls would be the best for you, since there is no other boys here and I believe you would soon enough learn to be a cute little princess, and it also seems like the girls here already adore you.
Chapter 3. a new life in hell and paradise
After the talk with jacks aunt Mrs Redrose, he would be picked up my Mrs Jackson and brough to a cute little room in the girls door it was a lot bigger then jacks normal room but it was some massive problems here, first off the room was pink like light pink with Disney princesses on the wall not only that his new closet was filled up with only girl clothes and cute little dresses why would jack need any of this he isn’t a little girl he is a big boy this is stupid and wanted to see if there was a chance for him escaping the school, so he waited for Mrs Jackson to set in down on the floor so he could walk around he would look through the windows to see that there was no real way out from is view just a big stupid gate guarded by security, this did not feel like a happy school for him this felt like a massive prison and he knew he would not like anything that would happen later.
Jack did find a second door the lead into another room from his room, he would slowly open the door to see a nightmare come true, it was a changing table why is there a changing table in there, jack would look hopelessly at Kaitlyn wishing for some type of misunderstanding or that it was placed there by accident.

Mrs Jackson: oh the changing table well we don’t want you to have any accidents now do we Jessica plus the training panties will only help you look cuter, I bet the girls will just die from cuteness when they see you later.
Jack would start running for the door, but Kaitlyn would just end up closing the door and him and swoops him up from the floor with a smile at him, she would begin to undress him while he tried to fight back, but she would easily over power him, like what the hell is this woman like a muscle builder or a soldier she dose not look it but the is really strong, not long later jack would sit on the table in the bathroom fully nude trying to cover his parts and is a little afraid from what Kaitlyn would do if he attempted to fight her to much she would grab a cute par of princess training panties she mention it would hide his pee-pee if he were to get excited while being with so many cute girls, she would also make sure to put a par of pink silk panties over the training panties on him they would have a little bow on the from.
After the first stage of hell for jack was over it would be the school outfit next, the outfit would stand of a cute rose white shirt, with a silky light pink jacket that had the logo of the school on the front left of the jacket, then it was some cute light pink high socks that would go over the knees and till the end a cute pink skirt that would lay just above the high socks but to finish off the outfit there would be a little pink ribbon around her neck over the skirt (like a tie but a ribbon) with a pair of cute little Maryjane shoes with a bow my the legs.
Jack would look at himself in the mirror just speechless he did not look like he did when I was put in that car there was no way the girl in the mirror was him like there was just not way he was defiantly going to get his ass beaten by all his friends if they where to see him, but that would be something for him to have to deal with later since he was actually falling asleep, jack hated how he looked but there was something about these clothes that was just so comfortable not long after Katlyn would notice that jack was really calm so she would look closer at him to see that the little guy had actually fallen asleep
Mrs. Jackson: aww looks like someone was a sleepy little princess I can’t hide you for myself looks like the girls going to enjoy this view
Katlyn would pick up jack/Jessica and takes him/her into her arms then heads out of the room, she would take a quick stop to Mrs Redrose office to show that someone fell asleep can’t blame him/her, they have had a really hard day they would giggle making comments how she was so adorable like this while he was cuddling up to Katlyn,
She would later take little Jessica out to show the girls that the new transfer student had fallen sleep while she was being helped getting dressed and the girls would giggle but made sure they weren’t loud enough to wake her up they would have such a fun day watching little Jessica sleep in Katlyn’s arms she would take her around the school grounds so most of the girls got a good look on little Jessica but it didn’t take to long before Katelyn decided that the fun was over and she was going to take Jessica back to her room so she could sleep in a comfy bed then being swarmed by giggling girls not everyone liked that but they didn’t stop Katlyn or anything.
Katlyn would return to Jessica’s room shortly after and got little Jessica out of the school uniform and into a night gown with pink butterflies on she would turn of the light and leaves the room after making sure everything was nice and tightly.
Chapter 4. Unchangeable Changes.
Jessica would wake up the next morning to Katlyn sitting next to her bed, she would hand little Jessica a pill and a glass of water she would explain that Jessica would need to take this pill at least 7 times a day for 1 day then Katlyn would be the one giving it to him/her, Jessica didn’t really mind it was just a stupid pill ether way and also seemed like him/her name didn’t matter anymore since in this place it was surprisingly Jessica instead of jack.
Jack would quickly be changed from his/her nightgown to the school uniform, its annoyed Jessica a lot since it was just so girly but there was no way he would attempt to fight Katlyn her strength scared him enough
Jessica: so, um what are we supposed to do now Katlyn since I’m board and a little hungry.
Mrs. Jackson: well Jessica we can head to the food hall to get you something to breakfast and Mrs Redrose has order that you won’t attend any classes to all changes had been made.
Jessica: what changes, is there some work at the school that is being done?
Mrs. Jackson: no but I’ll tell you about it when they are fully completed then you will be able to attend all classes with all the other student.
Jessica was so surprised on how she can smile and act so kind all the time and attend all the classes does that mean gym to that would be amazing meaning I bet they only have girls changing room meaning he/she would be able to see all those cute girls naked maybe coming here wasn’t too bad
Mrs. Jackson: also just to tell you around 70% of the girls here are both lesbian and feminists plus they hate men so if you tell anyone that you are a guy and they believe you we can’t promise your safety, to a full capacity so pls don’t attempt that also attempting to leave the premise without permission from Mrs. Redrose, it would be a dangerous act since all the security here is all highly skilled ex-military soldiers and don’t like men so much ether so I believe it would be a bad idea for you to try to attempt any type of stupid actions.
Jessica would feel his/her soul dying since he was plaining to try to escape this place later this week now knowing it could be the death on him he lost just another hope of surviving and almost wants to cry, but he doesn’t want to seem like he was weak in any form he still had his man hood and would not give up.
Katlyn would grab his/her hand, they would walk out of the room and down a hall then took the elevator down to the main area and out the main gate of the main building, they would then walk down a massive street that had thousand of girls walking on all giggling when they saw little Jessica, Katlyn would stop and crouches down Infront of Jessica stating there was something she had forgotten to add to Jessica’s uniform it was a gift for Jessica from Mrs. Redrose, she would put this silk thread around his/her legs and down to her feet where Jessica was wearing cute small Maryjane shoes and on the side there would be these small cute bells that would ring a little when Jessica would walk, it was super cute and adorable plus it would make the girls giggle to hear little Jessica walking around holding Katlyn’s hand, it wouldn’t take long or be far till they would be at the food hall.
When they walked in it would be even more girls giggling hearing a little bells ring from Jessica’s little bells, he/she was bright red when she walks over to the food lady that would giggle a little bit herself and asked
Food lady: hello there ladies what would you girls want today.
Mrs. Jackson: yes, Mary our little transfer student felt a little hungry so I though you could make her something tasty.
Mary: hmm is that so well we can’t leave the little girl hungry now can we, I’ll get some pancakes for the little cutie I believe that is a cute and tasty breakfast for someone so precious.
The comments the food lady Mary would make made little jasmine blush more then before. Jessica would be handed a plate with big fluffy pancakes that made little Jessica smile brightly, Katlyn would then lead her over to a char.
Jessica would get up on the char and started enjoying his/her breakfast eating big fluffy pancakes, after the pancakes Katlyn would clean our Jessica’s face with a cloth napkin and takes her down from the char, she would then takes out another pill and has Jessica swallow it oddly her/his body seems to start changing a little but it wasn’t more then her/his chest buffing out a little and her/his hips getting a little bigger bit not enough for Jessica to notice it.
Rest of the day would mostly be of exploring the school and everything else in the area while she/he kept taking those pls turning more and more to a girl, Jessica would return to her room at the end of the day and took the last of the pills before her nappy was checked and she had a little accident, Katlyn would change her nappy then undressed her and placed her in her nightgown,
When Jessica woke up all had been done her body and everything else had changed and she had stopped being a boy and is now finally a girl, she should now be able to attend the school and be one of the girls that Mr’s Redrose and Mrs, Jackson had hoped for.

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Good first effort!

bobbie-c's picture

God morgen, James.

Some grammar and composition issues, but it was an excellent first effort, especially for someone who doesn't speak English natively.

Excellent take on a popular trope here in BCTS.

Gratulerer! Jeg er sikker på at du vil gjøre det enda bedre i neste historie.

 

Fun story

Oh, my! I’m having a tough time forming coherent sentences after reading this. But, wow! What a cute story. I expect there'll be happy and exciting times coming for little Jessica just as soon as she gives up on the notion that she’s a bratty little boy.

Great start for a new author.

sorry

Maddy Bell's picture

There are some very basic 'rules' when writing that help everyone read the finished article, they apply to any language, for example using "@@@" to denote speech. There may well be a nice story in there but I lost the plot before I'd read the first 'chapter' and gave up. Perhaps one of the BC fangirls could act as editor to make it readable in English? (yes I know other languages use different sentence structures which is why its essential that 'translations' are edited into the target language.)

Please, keep writing, the more you do, the better you get (hopefully), I'd like to see a more coherent version of this.


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