Untamed storm on her face -
the rain gentle on her bare skin -
she dances on a knife edge
between joy, hope, fear, sadness -
always moving between places -
a true gypsy of life
as she looks for something the best she can-
hoping against hope that she can find what she is looking for...
yet fears what it is and what it will cost her-
every thing has its price..
around people
yet still so very much alone -
few people she talks to,
even less will see her true pain
and fear that she hides the best she can -
needing help and support
yet not knowing how to ask -
not being able to trust the few people
that try after being let down / hurt by so many others in her past -
so much of her past is unknown/a mystery to her... -
so many questions she has
yet so few answers that she knows with her past -
known by many
yet very few ever can really know her and her reasons..
Yet she still dances on in the gentle falling rain.
Comments
A little about this
Hi everyone - this is the first story for me on here (please be gentle - I hope I done it the right way? : ) and is about some of the things in my life at this point in time and is me trying to put my thoughts down in words as I have been going through some rough/dark times lately
Dance with us Gypsy Girl
You don't need to dance alone. Look at the many members on this site and the length of time it has operated. Don't be frightened to share your experiences, thoughts and concerns that can be done directly or in stories and you can make contact with others who have all types of their own life experience.
Jules
Lovely
And you are too!
Love, Andrea Lena
Dancer
Gypsy Girl
Loved it read it a few times to get the feel of the story
"yet fears what it is and what it will cost her- every thing has its price.."
Depends how much we want to pay and we can all dance together just takes
one to get up and start and others will join
SamanthaAnn
Really
Gripping. Outstanding. Excellent. Heartbreaking and sort of familiar.
Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee
that is a beautiful poem!
thank you for sharing it!
A nice poem, no need to be
A nice poem, no need to be afraid here!
This is a very friendly site, everyone has their doubts, but here you can write them away, and have supporting comments after each posting.
Hugs,
Karen