Printer-friendly versionFlowering Hearts (The Question)
My heart is like a flower,
each heart break causes a petal to fade.
Every girl I love that can’t return the love,
that’s a heart break, another petal fades.
Every girl that pretends to love me and tosses me to the side,
that’s another heart break, another petal fades.
Every girl that says she can’t love me because your a girl or not a girl...
that’s another heart break another petal fades.
The petals of my heart are fading,
there’s another heart break … They are almost gone...
When the last petal fades,
will I still be able to go on…or will I fade away?
Flowering Hearts 2 (The Answer)
As the last petal fades,
I can’t help but bring to mind,
the last poem, the last line.
Will I still be able to go on…or will I fade away?
I cried for days as I felt my heart decay.
I sealed up my love and tried to make is disappear,
try as I might I just can’t make it adhere.
A miracle is happening as I sit here and mourn!
I am confused and scared my heart is torn.
The last petal hasn’t fallen what is this that I perceive.
Did my heart seek to deceive?
The last petal can’t fall cuz there is hope,
my love can’t help but cope.
The petal cannot fall for it is in there tight,
it won’t let go without one last fight!
each heart break causes a petal to fade.
Every girl I love that can’t return the love,
that’s a heart break, another petal fades.
Every girl that pretends to love me and tosses me to the side,
that’s another heart break, another petal fades.
Every girl that says she can’t love me because your a girl or not a girl...
that’s another heart break another petal fades.
The petals of my heart are fading,
there’s another heart break … They are almost gone...
When the last petal fades,
will I still be able to go on…or will I fade away?
I can’t help but bring to mind,
the last poem, the last line.
Will I still be able to go on…or will I fade away?
I cried for days as I felt my heart decay.
I sealed up my love and tried to make is disappear,
try as I might I just can’t make it adhere.
A miracle is happening as I sit here and mourn!
I am confused and scared my heart is torn.
The last petal hasn’t fallen what is this that I perceive.
Did my heart seek to deceive?
The last petal can’t fall cuz there is hope,
my love can’t help but cope.
The petal cannot fall for it is in there tight,
it won’t let go without one last fight!
Comments
don't let go
"the petal cannot fall for it is in there tight,
it won’t let go without one last fight!"
Indeed hon. Don't let go, keep fighting, keep hoping.
"Life isn't all butterflies and rainbows"
dorothycolleen
Said It Before
[email protected] Thanks Ren. You've captured the essence of what I feel for My Bailey.
So Many Thanks,
Huge Hugs,
Always Your Friend,
Jonelle-Elise
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The contrast is superb
I love the wonder and dreamlike feeling of your poetry; and it's hopeful, which I appreciate so much in my own life. Your verse always brings me to painful but hopeful tears. I'm glad this is posted as a story/verse! Thank you!
Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
Flowering Hearts (Question and Answer)
Thank you for posting your poem. It has touched the Hearts of many, here.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Touched?
Truly I never imagined that my writing would touch so many people...I'm in shock over it, I'm so glad Jonelle and my GF talked me into publishing this as a story/verse instead of just a blog ^///^
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