The Witch's Tarot : Chapter 4

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The Witch’s Tarot
 © 2009–Nick B
The Witch’s Tarot

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Chapter IV: Revelations

Chloe followed Elizabeth out of the café, her head in a whirl. So much seemed to be going on in her mind that it was difficult to separate fact from fiction. The sudden appearance of Edward Ellsworth brought her head back into the present.

He stood very close and looked directly at Chloe, his lips curled into a snarl. “We meet again,” he said. “You’re looking well, Elizabeth.”

“What makes you think I’m Elizabeth?” she asked.

“It is not who I think you are, witch; it is who I know you to be.”

“Well, I’m afraid you’re mistaken. She’s Elizabeth,” Chloe retorted, poking her chin in Elizabeth’s direction. “I’m Chloe.”

Elizabeth pushed past her friend. “Look, mister,” she said, a note of irritability in her voice, “I don’t know or care who you are, but you’re starting to piss us off. Why don’t you just go stalk someone else, before I call the police?”

“It’s alright,” Chloe said, gently laying her hand on Elizabeth’s forearm. “I can handle this idiot.”

“So you are Elizabeth,” Ellsworth said.

“Not a chance, I’m Chloe–I told you that. You don’t scare me, even though that’s clearly what you’re trying to do. Arseholes like you should be locked up and they should throw away the key. I suggest you bugger off and leave Elizabeth and me alone.”

Edward looked annoyed–angry even and reached out, grabbing Chloe by the arm. “I would not be inclined to be quite so flippant, witch. I do not believe this subterfuge, I can feel who you are. I have defeated you more times than I care to remember. This time will be no exception,” he said between clenched teeth.

Chloe grimaced.

“I see from your reaction, you recall some of our previous meetings,” he said smugly.

“No, actually I have no idea what you’re talking about, but you are hurting me,” she said, struggling to get her arm free from Ellsworth’s vice-like grip. “Let go of me.”

She swung her free arm and slapped his chest. A mark appeared the same shape as her hand. Much of it twinkled in reds and gold’s, spreading outwards from the centre as thin wisps of smoke rose through the material. She wrenched her arm free of Ellsworth’s grasp and took two steps back, looking at Elizabeth, whose eyes were just as wide as Ellsworth’s.

Edward grabbed at his chest, terror showing on his face as he patted and rubbed at the ever-increasing smouldering patch. He started to panic as smoky, blackened particles fell around him; people looking on, some showing concern and others laughing as he danced around, patting himself whilst ‘ow-ing’ and taking sharp intakes of breath as he tried in vain to extinguish the garment.

“Youlied!” he exclaimed. “This isn’t over.” Then, turning on his heels, he disappeared into the tide of people, most of whom were now at least smiling at the exchange, probably unaware of what Chloe had actually done.

Chloe approached Elizabeth after Ellsworth had gone and was shocked as her friend shrank away from her. “What the hell did you do to him?” Elizabeth demanded, shock showing on her face.

“I don’t know, it just happened,” was all Chloe could say, shaking from the ordeal.

“I thought I knew you,” Elizabeth said, shaking her head and continuing to back away any time Chloe tried to get nearer to her.

“You do know me–as well, if not better than I know myself.”

“Obviously I don’t know you as well as I should then,” Elizabeth said, giving Chloe a look that showed her fear and disappointment.

She said nothing to Chloe after that. Her brow seemed permanently furrowed and she muttered frequently, though Chloe didn’t hear what she was muttering about. Each time Chloe tried asking, she would look away.

It hurt.

The one person Chloe felt she had any kind of bond with was in the process of rejecting her and she felt that at any time, Elizabeth could say goodbye and that would be that.

“Please say something,” Chloe pleaded. “You haven’t said anything for hours and all you have done is mutter and stomp about.”

“Are you surprised?” Elizabeth retorted.

Chloe could feel the tears well up; the lump in her throat getting bigger alerting her to the fact that sobs were just moments away. “we–ell, yes, I am.”

“I thought you were my friend,” Elizabeth said accusingly. “I shouldn’t be scared of my friends, but right now and after what you did, you scare me.”

“What have I done to you? For God’s sake, Elizabeth; I would never doanything to hurt you. That thing with Ellsworth? I don’t know how it happened–it just did.”

“What you did to him wasn’t normal, Chloe. That was freakish and knowing you did it without even thinking is just scary–so not right.”

“Elizabeth, please,” Chloe begged. “I would never hurt you.”

“How do you know that? You can’t know that. If you did that to him without knowing, what might you do to me?”

The tears began to flow as Elizabeth stormed off, leaving Chloe staring at her hand, the hand she’d hit Ellsworth with; a hand that appeared to be perfectly normal–nothing special, but how had she done that?

She wiped her eyes and ran after Elizabeth. “Wait up,” she shouted, but Elizabeth just kept going.

Chloe wove her way through the shoppers and eventually caught her friend.

“Get away from me, freak,” Elizabeth snarled and with that, she turned and left Chloe standing, watching as she disappeared into the crowds.

“Now what do I do?” Chloe asked herself, taking a seat on one of the ornate cast benches.


Elizabeth arrived home in a right old mood.

Her friend–her best friend, had turned out to be a freak–a scary freak at that. Whatever she’d done to that man wasn’t natural and if she’d done that to him, wasn’t it possible she could do something like that to her?

“Oh!” said Lynne, obviously surprised, but nevertheless pleased to see Elizabeth home. “I’m glad you’re back. I need to go out early.” She looked around. “Where’s Chloe? I thought she was coming back with you.”

“Don’t know and don’t care,” she replied, not sounding overly convincing as she flopped on the sofa with a deep sigh.

Lynn looked taken aback. “Oh. Well, er, whatever. I have to go out early and I haven’t had the time to clear up downstairs. Would you mind?”

“Off to the pub are you?” Elizabeth said with a sneer.

“Probably not actually, but if we do go, it won’t be until much later,” Lynne replied without rising to the taunt. “Ellen still hasn’t heard from Steve and both of us are worried. The police haven’t heard anything either so we’re going to the police station to give a detailed description. Are you sure he didn’t say anything to you?”

The fact that her aunt was focussed on something other than partying elicited a note of sympathy from Elizabeth. “No, nothing; I’m sorry.”

“It was worth asking. There’s some lasagne in the fridge that will take five minutes in the microwave. I’ll be going back home with Ellen. She’s beside herself with worry. Will you be alright here?”

“Yeah. I’m just going to watch some telly then I expect I’ll go to bed.”

Lynne stood over Elizabeth, looking down at her sad-looking niece. “What really happened today?” she asked, sitting on the arm of the sofa.

Elizabeth’s eyes started to brim immediately. “I don’t know that I can describe it exactly, but let’s put it this way, Chloe’s not the girl I thought she was.” She began to cry. “I thought we were friends. I thought she liked me.”

“I’m sure she does. I’ve seen the way she looks at you.”

“Well if she liked me, she wouldn’t scare me would she?”

“Sometimes people do things that scare us. Look at Steve. He’s never done anything like this before and he’s certainly scaring Ellen half to death. I’m not far behind.” Lynne looked at her niece and gently stroked the hair away from her face. “It doesn’t mean she loves him any less though–or he, her for that matter and I’m sure that there’s a very good reason why Chloe did what she did, but it doesn’t mean she likes you any less or would want to harm you, does it? Anyway,” Lynne whispered. “I expect it’ll all come out in the wash.”

Elizabeth sat up. “Do you really think so? She really frightened me down at the precinct. I should have just let it go, but I didn’t. I know she wouldn’t hurt me, but–”

“–Don’t worry about it. These things have a way of working themselves out.”

Lynne gave Elizabeth a peck on the forehead. “I’ll see you later. If not, tomorrow morning.”

“Good luck, Lynne,” she replied.

Lynne stopped dead in her tracks, spun round, probably looking for a sneer or a face being pulled, but there was nothing. “Thank you,” she said.

Elizabeth sat on the sofa. She hadn’t even made herself a cup of tea or coffee, got a soft drink, a sandwich, snacks or anything and after about and hour of flicking through the countless channels of pap on the television, she decided to go downstairs, simply to take her mind off possibly the biggest mistake she’d ever made.

“So this is where it all began,” she said, looking about her.

The walls were still bedecked with the little figures of witches on brooms, skulls with daft grins and other things that glowed in the dark or went bump in the night, while at the foot of the stairs, stood the table. The cards were still laid out in exactly the same place as they had been and as she began collecting them up, she felt a strange tingling sensation running up from her hands. Then, before her very eyes, up popped a woman who looked for all the world like a real witch. Her steely grey hair, long pointy chin and the wart on the end of her equally pointy nose just screamed ‘witch’. Strangest of all, was the fact that if she concentrated, Elizabeth could see straight through the figure of the woman, to the empty plant stand on the other side of the room.

“You’re not my pretty one are you?” the apparition said. “Not that you’re not pretty, you understand. In fact, you’re very pretty, just not the one I was expecting–or rather hoping for.”

Elizabeth dropped the cards as if they were hot coals and the image vanished.

She stood there for several moments, wringing her hands and not quite knowing what to do. Eventually, she picked the cards up and again, the tingling sensation returned.

“Please don’t do that, I don’t know how long I can keep this up.”

“Who are you?”

“Elizabeth Knotts–at you service,” the apparition said, bowing floridly.

This must be the Elizabeth, Edward Ellsworth thought Chloe was she thought. “Um, the boy who was here last night using these cards–do you know what happened to him?”

“The pretty one?” the apparition asked, nodding. “Oh yes. I changed him.”

“You did what? Why?”

“That is none of your concern,” said the apparition, with a hint of steel in her voice.

“It’s not?” Elizabeth exclaimed. “It most certainly is. My best friend just touched someone and they started smouldering. I thought he was going to burst into flames. What’s to say that she couldn’t have done something like that to me? Surely, that makes it my concern.”

“She did what?” asked the apparition, looking shrewdly at Elizabeth.

“She hit this bloke on the chest and it left a blackened handprint which smouldered and smoked. I thought he was going to catch fire.”

“Who was this man?” her face was thoughtful and her eyebrow raised.

“I don’t know. Some weirdo who thinks Chloe is me–or you.”

“Chloe?”

Yeah, well, she doesn’t know who she is–amnesia or something–and she thought that if she had a name, it would help her feel better about the situation; just till she gets her memory back.”

The apparition sat down heavily on a chair. “Oh dear.”

“What now?” asked Elizabeth, beginning to get a little exasperated by the apparition’s reluctance to be forthcoming with any information.

“Who chose that particular name?”

“She did. She liked it and although I didn’t think it fitted her, it’s starting to grow on me. She thought it was perfect.”

“It is,” the apparition said, her voice softening and her eyes taking on a faraway look. “It couldn’t be though.”

“Couldn’t be what? Come on, enough with all the cloak and dagger stuff. What’s going on?”

The apparition took a deep breath. “Chloe was my companion–before all this happened.” She shook her head and sighed. “Must be over five hundred years ago now. She was murdered right in front of me by a warlock who–”

“A what?”

“Warlock, girl. Now don’t interrupt, we’re running out of time and talking about half a millennium of history here.”

“Wow!”

“Precisely. Anyway, Chloe and I lived in a house left to me by my parents and together we were very happy until a man named Edward Ellsworth–”

“Ellsworth?” Elizabeth exclaimed. “That’s the name of the man Chloe burned earlier.”

“Hmm. I thought as much.” The apparition nodded. “He started making overtures towards me. At first I was flattered, but I wasn’t interested in the slightest. I found him to be the epitome of what I didn’t like in a man–or anybody else really. I tried to let him down gently. It didn’t have the desired effect however, and the more I told him I wasn’t interested, the harder he tried.

“Then one day, I discovered that he had announced our engagement. I was livid–as you can well understand. I never agreed to marry him and went to confront him. All he did was take on the arrogant stance of someone with whom I would never spend a moment longer than was necessary. He said, ‘you will marry me Elizabeth Knotts and you’ll enjoy every moment of it.’”

“Sounds like a right arsehole,” said Elizabeth, remembering what Chloe had called him.

“I like that,” the apparition said, smiling. “In fact, it’s perfect.”

“I thought so too when Chloe told him that in town earlier.”

“Anyway, I told him that there was absolutely no chance that I would consent to marry a blackguard like him and he slapped me. ‘You will learn to be more respectful, woman,’ he said and I ran, got into my carriage and drove home as fast as I could, crying all the way.

“Chloe was there to meet me and once inside, I broke down again. Chloe did her best to comfort me and pretty soon we were in an embrace with Chloe telling me how I would not have to marry him and that it would all be alright, but whilst she and I embraced, he appeared, his face like thunder.

“We stared in fright as he appeared in the doorway, a tower of rage. ‘Get away from her,’ he bellowed, snatching Chloe from me and dashing her to the floor. She cried out as she landed, which just seemed to anger him further. He raised his hand, sending a bolt of what looked like lightning across the room, hitting poor Chloe in the chest. I ran to her and cradled her in my arms, whispering ‘I love you, I love you,’ but it made no difference. My Chloe was dead.”

“Blimey!” Elizabeth gasped. “Couldn’t you zap him back?”

“I didn’t know how to back then, but even if I could have, I was stricken with grief and not thinking clearly. It was the first time I had admitted to anyone, least of all myself that she was the person I loved and just when it was too late, it stared me in the face; I had accepted it, but she was dead. It was too late.

“He just laughed. ‘That should make it easier now, shouldn’t it? Marry me and I can make all of this go away.’ Without thinking, I screamed ‘NEVER!’ and ran at him, scratching at his face, but instead of backing off as I’d hoped he would, he just got more angry, throwing me to the ground on top of my beloved, raising his hand again and engulfing me in a kind of fog.

“When the fog had gone, he laughed out loud. ‘If I can’t have you, then from now on, no-one will even want you.’ When I saw what he’d done, I cried solidly for weeks. He had turned me from a fair maiden to what you see now. He threatened to tell the townsfolk that I had killed Chloe; that I was a witch–unless I left there and then. What could I do? I fled.”

“Where did you go, I mean all that time ago, it can’t have been easy?”

“It wasn’t. I just ran away from everything and everyone. I was so embarrassed by what he’d done to me and how he’d made me look, I just made my way deep into the forest, trying to scrape a living from the land, keeping out of everybody’s way, but I couldn’t survive on my own. I was found there by a woman named Ursula. She saw through the outer ugliness and took me in.

“She taught me the Wiccan ways and after four or more years with her, I had learnt to temper my desire for revenge as well as keeping my true identity from the rest of the townsfolk. The fact that we lived outside the main town was helpful and no-one recognised me anyway, so I was able to live something of a normal life, although continually haunted by what Edward Ellsworth had done to both Chloe and to me.

When Ursula died, I took the mantle of looking after the needs of the people in the same way she had, but then things went awry. The man who had killed my beloved became the town’s Mayor. I knew it was him and although I tried to avoid him and remain incognito, he found me and told the townsfolk what I had done–even though in reality, it was he who had been the perpetrator of that heinous crime.

“I was tried in a mock trial where everyone present, except me, was under his influence and as far as I know, they’re still there, fixed in time, but I got him. I dragged him along with me and it’s been a fight ever since.”

“When we met Ellsworth outside here last night and in town this afternoon, I thought it was me he was after, but now I realise it was you,” said Elizabeth–the younger.

“You must get Chloe back here with all haste, my girl. I don’t know how much strength I have left, so win or lose, this is likely to me my last showdown with that–what was it you called him?”

“Arsehole?”

“Yes; that arsehole! If I lose, the repercussions will be felt all the way through history. I must stop him. There’s no telling the damage failing will do.”

Elizabeth–the younger was just about to put the cards down on the table.

“Just how long have you known Chloe?” the apparition asked.

“Since last night.”

“And you have already slept with her?”

“How the–?” Elizabeth began, then realised she was talking to a woman who at the same time as not really being there, how not really been there for over five hundred years. “It wasn’t like that,” she argued, blushing furiously.

“I see,” the apparition observed. “And when did you know that you were in love with her?”

“I’m not!” Elizabeth stated. “She’s my friend… She’s my best friend, but that’s all.”

“Of course it is,” said the apparition. “But remember not to make the same mistake I did. It was too late when I came to admit my feelings. I would hate to see the same thing happen to you.”

“Well it won’t, will it?” Elizabeth said somewhat pugnaciously. “It’s not that kind of a relationship.”

“Of course it isn’t. Now go get her before Edward does and we all fail.”


The wind had freshened and was blowing freezing gusts from the north-east, making people scurry in all directions, whilst pulling their collars up and fastening their coats, jackets and anything else they had on, tightly around them.

Chloe had wandered around the big department store slowly, trying to stay out of the cold for as long as possible. However, they were closing and she had to leave, but where was she supposed to go and what was she supposed to do?

She stepped out on to the cobbled street as the smiling man said, “We’re open again at nine tomorrow,” and closed the door behind her, the keys clinking against the glass.

Darkness had already draped itself over everything, which only made it seem colder than it already was. With no money and no idea where to go–other than Elizabeth’s house–she sat back down on one of the cast stone seats, taking a sharp intake of breath as the coldness threatened to draw every last degree of heat through her bum.

“It’s not nice out here is it?” said a voice that Chloe recognised immediately.

“Elizabeth?” she exclaimed, jumping up and wrapping her arms around her friend, hugging her tightly. “I thought I’d lost you.”

“Whoa!” Elizabeth replied, trying to suppress a giggle. “Easy tiger.”

“I didn’t think you’d come back.”

“I nearly didn’t, but let’s just say this was on the cards.”


The two girls walked back up the road towards Elizabeth’s house and Chloe listened while Elizabeth told her about Ellsworth and Elizabeth’s namesake.

“So she was real? I wasn’t just dreaming about her or Ellsworth?”

“It seems not and from what she was saying, this encounter between her and Edward could be the last.”

“Why?”

“She’s been growing weaker with every encounter and she doesn’t think she has it in her to make it through another.”

“Shit!”

“Anyway, we need to get you back home as soon as possible for the next round.”

“Um, just a minute,” said Chloe as a metaphoric light blinked on over her head. “What do you mean get me back for the next round?”

“Well, you’re involved–kinda crucial actually. She can’t do it without you.”

“Nuh-uh. I could get hurt… or turned into some form of vegetable or something.”

“Can you hear yourself, Chloe? You started a fire on a man just by touching him. If anything, he should be scared of you. Elizabeth wouldn’t have changed you if she didn’t think–”

“Yes, but none of that was me. It was Elizabeth–the witch. She must have put her ‘fluence in me. I can’t fight Ellsworth. I’m just a girl.” Another metaphoric light flashed in the dim recesses of her slow-moving mind. “She changed me? What d’you mean, changed me? Changed me from what?”

Elizabeth suddenly realised that she was possibly about to send Chloe off into an apoplectic fit.

“A boy,” she said quietly, her head bowed as if it were her fault.

Chloe blinked. “She did what?!”

“Look, Chloe. There’s something bigger than me or you going on here and we have a chance to be a part of it.”

“Which boy?”

“What?”

“Who did I used to be?”

“Steve, but that’s beside the point. The last five hundred years of history could be rewritten if you–”

“Was he nice?”

“Pardon?”

“Was–he–nice?” Chloe said slowly.

“Yes, I suppose so, I don’t really know. I was only with him for about ten minutes, probably less actually and then you were there. She had to do it because otherwise, the whole history from Elizabethan England onwards–”

“Did you like him?”

“What do you mean? I told you I was only with him for ten minutes, if that.”

“That’s not what I asked.”

“Okay!” she said irritably. “I liked him. Are you happy now?”

“More than me?”

“What?”

“Did you like him more than me?”

“It’s not the same.”

“What isn’t?”

“Well,” she replied. “If you were Steve, you’d never have stayed over last night for a start. You certainly wouldn’t be wearing my clothes and I doubt very much whether we would be having this conversation.”

“I see. So which of us do you like best?”

“That’s the same question you just asked. How can I answer that? Just drop it okay. I like you, isn’t that enough? I mean, why do you want to know anyway?”

“Because apart from the fire bit, I’ve really enjoyed today and wonder whether you’d have done something like this with Steve.”

Elizabeth didn’t know what to say to that. She too had enjoyed their day–apart that was, from the incident with the burning, but knowing that Chloe wasn’t wholly responsible put that into a different perspective. There was also the point that boys rarely liked shopping–well, from what she’d heard they didn’t, not in the way girls did, and Chloe had been happy pootling around the shops. She doubted very much whether Steve would.

Then there was this morning.

When she awoke, okay, Chloe had clobbered her with her elbow, but being so close to her was intoxicating, thrilling and that was without doing anything too. She thought she wouldn’t have been interested in girls and she still didn’t think she was–but being near Chloe was an exception.

Elizabeth had been–albeit surreptitiously–checking out other girls while they were in town and not one of them ‘did’ anything for her, but Chloe? She was a completely different matter and even before she knew that she used to be Steve–who she’d also been attracted to–Chloe just did something she couldn’t explain.

Of course, she couldn’t tell Chloe that–


To be continued…

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Thanks

a bunch Nick.

I'm not liking Elizabeth very much...

She knows what's happened to Steve, but lets everyone go on looking for him; of course she can't TELL them, but she doesn't seem to be bothered much about it, either. And to abandon someone she knows has no place to go... well, not nice.

The witch is supposed to be a sympathetic figure? After what she did to Steve? I'm not liking her much, either.

If it wasn't for Edward, I'd say Chloe would be well rid of both of them (yeah, I know, what about Steve?)

And speaking of which, Chloe wasn't the slighted bit put out by being abandoned?

Ah, well, there's always the next chapter ;) I look forward to it!

Nice complexity to the characters in Nick's comedy-drama-romance

... magic story.

I like it that with the exception of the clearly vile and evil ex-mayor/warlock the main characters are all flawed in some way, IE they are both good and bad with areas of grey like most real people..

Steve/Chloe's mom and the aunt are both caring and careless. His mom set him up to do the stupid fortune teller thing for HER party and HER amusement. Kinda of minor child abuse in a way in that HER fun came first and to hell with any repercussions in her son's life. The aunt is a lush, as her daughter has reminded her, to the point she calls her mom by her given name and not *mom," implying she does not respect her. Mom and aunt boozed it up Halloween -- another example of adults usurping a children's festival -- and failed to notice the strange girl running off and Steve disappearing. Now they are looking for her but have they got the police into it yet?

Elizabeth knows far more of what is happening than most yet has held info back from Chloe, Chloe's mom and her own mom. She knows the evil man is after Chloe and Chloe was simply defending herself but freaks when Chloe exhibits serious magical powers. Understandable but poor Chloe has only a vague memory to go on so she can't be responsible for her actions.

Then we have the witch, Elizabeth Knotts, there's a complex character. An innocent, not even originally a magic user who lost her love, her beauty, any chance of a family and her youth to a perverted warlock who wanted her so we understand her need for justice . But why transform Steve? Her power is fading -- hum, I wonder if the warlock's is too -- so she wastes it on transforming Steve rather than find someone easier to influence?

But then we have the wildcard of Chloe, the original one. Is Steve somehow her re-incarnation? Where did the new Chloe get the power fromm. We have no clue the original Chloe was a witch or was that a side effect of how she was murdered?

I wonder, as her power is faiding is he stuck as Chloe? Will he or she ever get his memories back and or any of original Chloe's memories?

What about the warning that if the warlock wins all of the last five-hundred years will change? And what if they win totally this time, will it affect the past and the original Chloe and Elizabeth will be restored? And who does Elizabeth, the modern one, love? Steve, Chloe, both and which Chloe, the old or the new? Plus how can Steve/Chloe survive if stuck as a girl with no documentation or past?

Lots of things you can play with, Nick.

Nice work

John in Wauwatosa

Right now, in the entire story...

Only Ursula, Steve and Chloe are/were definitely on the side of good.
The witch is at best Well Intentioned Extremist type, her namesake is immature and doesn't know what she wants, let alone needs.
Edward is a right arsehole.
Parents are somewhat lacking in caring and attentiveness department.

And the greatest question is - as the witch was unable to win the war with the warlock, even after 500 years, is it too much of a stretch to think that her methods were inherently flawed?

Faraway

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It's so well written! I

It's so well written! I really really like this story.

You Lied!

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You said this chapter would be the last and it's not. So I'm glad you lied actually as there is obviously much more to bring to the boil before we get a satisfactory (?) conclusion.

I liked that smouldering chest trick, but I hope Chloe is taught some control by Elizabeth the elder before she has another confrontation with the odious Edward. Oooh! I do like dastardly villains to get their just deserts (desserts?)

Like John, I'm itching to know who's in love with whom and who is paying the rent,

Joanne

The Smouldering Handprint

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I loved that bit with the smouldering handprint. What a subtle but cool magic effect! Very clever.

I'm having a little problem with some of the characterization. I'm sure you were trying to fool us poor readers about the witch but I'm still having a little trouble with her code of ethics. I'm also surprised that Chloe wasn't a little more upset about being abandoned. Those are small issues though. I'm still greatly enjoying the story.

One bit of characterization that I think is authentic is where the characters don't tell each other how they feel. That seems very British to me. It drives me crazy sometimes when I'm over with my British girlfriend. I'm sure I drive you Brits mad with my brash American ways too, so I guess we're even. Nyah!

I like the rewriting the timeline angle. That's very interesting. It's a little fuzzy but I think I'm following it. I'll wait and see if you explain it more in the next chapter. I don't want to speculate and spoil anything.

Thanks very much for the story. Please keep up the good work.

- Terry

Which witch is which witch?

Enough twists and turns here to make one quite dizzy. :)

Fortunately you manage to keep the episodes coming along at regular intervals so that the thread can be followed by those such as myself with terminally challenged memories.

Hugely enjoyable

Hugs,

Fleurie

Fleurie

Fleurie

That Change in 500 Years of History...

...which we're being told stems on the results of the upcoming battle againt Ellsworth: it seems to me that it's witch-Elizabeth winning that would change history. We (and presumably the characters here) ought to be part of the universe where Elizabeth was condemned and burned, if I read the opening correctly,

Eric

I beg to differ

Though yuor theory has merit, I think the former beauty turned witch by the sicko warlock and her transformations aftermath is telling the truth,

I think somehow they have fought through the centuries, her through those she's influenced with the tarot cards and him either as himself or as his own possesed decendents. More likely as himself given he can transform and kill with magic he should be able to hold off aging. I propose the theory that she has held him in check all these centuries but if he wins now he becomes all powerful with no checks on it, remember he has physical form. Thus history will be undone as tha *balance* will be broken.

If Elizabeth wins, the warlock is stopped forever and perhaps the damage he did will be undone though that will likely alter history too but not as bad as this amoral bastard, pardone my French, getting his way. Remember witch Elizabeth died 500 years ago and has no body, only her faiding powers.

Knowing this style of lit, TG transformation/magic fiction, I suspect he is stuck as Chloe even if Elizabeth tries to restore him. I wonder, if there is a lot of the murdered Chloe in the former boy-- this would be one reason she can't be restored to Steve -- is there anything of Elizabeth in the modern day Elizabeth? Remember the spirit of the dead Elizabeth's shock at Steve unconsciously naming herself Chloe. Maybe that is what should have happened in the World if the warlock had not caused all the trouble 500 years ago, IE the decendents of Elizabeth and Chloe, perhaps even their re-incarnated souls would be/were fated to be, lovers again?

The question is is Steve/Chloe just a pawn or is his becoming Chloe, except for the memory problems, exactly what should have happened in history if not for the warlocks tampering?

Fun to find out. Time for the less than ideal moms to prove their mettle and help. They could prove a wild card in this battle.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

There is also a question of power

Is it not a common notion that power only is present in either male or female line, being dormant in the other? Is it not possible to recast the changing spell on the warlock, robbing him of power, and returning Steve to original shape?

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Heaven... she goes from

Heaven... she goes from soulmate to I hate you freak, to I like you in under a day...

Thank you for writing this interesting story,
Beyogi