I've posted a snippet of my latest project, Forged In Fire, at my TGLibrary site. This is a military sci fi story very heavily influenced by the works of David Weber, so if you like that kind of thing please give it a peek. Be aware that this genre includes violence, explosions and even harsh language!
Oh, and this is a totally raw draft, so please, there is no need to point out the typos. I will get to the proofing in time, but right now I'm primarily interested in overall impressions. On my site you can also find some background material about the story setting.
You can find the snippet here: Opening Shot
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Please check out the Snippet
Please check out the Snippet!
It's a wonderfully detailed Universe that Forged in Fire is set in. There has been a loving attention to details so that the projected science feels right. The Universe holds together so that it is believable. The characters are identifiable even though they don't live in our universe as it is today. It is in the traditions of Heinlein, Asimov and Clarke that another great Science Fiction Universe is born. It's amazing to be let in on the ground floor. And please leave a comment to Scott Ramsey to prove that you were there since we don't seem to have any page view counters over there.
Exploring the impossibilities,
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Kool
Kool stuff Scott! Not too much techno-babble and a lot of outer space shoot'em up! Will this one include any TG? Couldn't tell from the snip!
grover
opening shot
left a couple of comments on technical stuff, but just suspending disbelief and accepting would also work. Good writing, good technique as usual, good battle scene, maybe I liked it.