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by Penny Reed Cardon
After years of struggling with his feelings little Matthias discovers, with some loving guidance, why he hates wearing jeans.
The beginning was a beautiful time, filled with mystery and discovery.
If we are lucky, someone will discover that we are struggling
who will lovingly help and guide us as we grow.
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If we are lucky, someone will discover that we are struggling
who will lovingly help and guide us as we grow.
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Raised in SLC
A good story, but needs polishing.
"you're" means you are, please use the possive "your".
"sole is the bottom of your shoe, "soul" is what goes to heaven or hell.
"heal" means to get well, "heel" is the tall end of a shoe.
"their" is a possive that implies ownership,
don't confuse it with "there".
"heart and soul" and "happy as a lark" are cliches, please avoid them.
Loved the story any way.
Carolyn B
Carolyn B
Carolyn
Thank you for you input.
I'm pleased that you loved the story dispite my errors.
Penny