I've posted the final part of my story today. It's longer than the other parts and includes some things people have been asking about... including a seduction, but I've tried not to be too explicit.
When I got to the end I was going to put "The End", but it feels more like "A Beginning". There's a lot of un-answered threads still and places these characters could go. But I'm drawing a line under everything for now.
I'm moving house soon and I have some other stories backed up. But I'm hoping to write about Bobbi and Jordan some more this year.
Thanks for all your comments.
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but it's now mysteriously vanished from the front page, oh no!
I'm guessing it's human error when removing the previous part from the front page.
But, who knows? It could be a conspiracy to deny my public from reading the final awe-inspiring conclusion of my epic tale!
(I crack me up ;-) )
and now it's back
Thank you magic elves that work tirelessly on our behalf, I never doubted you!
and now it's back
Thank you magic elves that work tirelessly on our behalf, I never doubted you!
Thanks
"... including a seduction, but I've tried not to be too explicit." Aw... :-)
Part 8 is on the front page, so if it's not the final part, the final part should be easily accessible -- once I get to it.
-- Daphne Xu (a page of contents)
I'm never sure how explicit to be
I do like to leave some of it to the readers imagination. Some of you come up with things I wouldn't know how to describe.
Part 8, sadly, is where the story ends for now.
Nice idea.
That's definitely a good idea, leaving certain things to the imagination.
-- Daphne Xu (a page of contents)