Interesting quote from a bad novel

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“You see it from a man’s point of view-you see sex as a coupling, like two cars in a train attaching themselves to each other with a gentle crunch. Women see it as a penetration, an invasion, an assault with or without battery, which leaves scars, some of which are visible, most of which are concealed. Can’t you understand? At different points in our lives we are different people. These points can be days apart, even hours, it doesn’t matter. Women love differently then men. We spend our lives trying to figure out . what it means to be female. For the six months that we were together. Emilio imposed his definition on me. To the Emilio’s of this world, to be female is to be at the service of men, the receptacle in which they deposit their seed when they get the urge.”

So what do YOU think?

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Bad writing is correct

The author manages to contradict him/herself in one paragraph. The last sentence completely contradicts the first. Talk about mixed metaphors.

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Needs more context

Needs more context

Joining together like a coupling is a heck of a lot better than forcing ones self on another, without further context it doesn't make sense and makes the male view sounds better.

I'm told STFU more times in a day than most people get told in a lifetime

Twisted thinking

Patricia Marie Allen's picture

If a man truly feels the way the author say men do, that man needs to grow up. If the woman comes away from sex the way the woman in this paragraph is portrayed, he's doing it wrong.

Neither observation is anywhere near correct as a blanket statement about men and women's view of sex. Unfortunately, there are some who do fit the paragraph. Hopefully those people will mature and get a healthy view of sex.

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