Puzzled and confused. Re: Like A Candle In The Wind story.

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I just finished re-reading an older story by Lisa Sartori, Like A Candle In The Wind, and I am somewhat disheartened by the lack of kudos and comments.

Could it be that because it is such an older story and those who read it before haven't bothered to re-read it? Lisa has updated it quite a bit and there is a different ending.

It's such a wonderful story that SHOULD speak to the fantasies and dreams of a lot of us, and it's so well written with great characters and a solid, engaging plot, and it makes me wonder.

In the course of my reading and writing I've read countless stories that, for whatever reason, garner monstrous hits, kudos and comments even though they might be full of spelling errors and shakey plots or even poor character developement... while some I've read have wonderful grammar, great characters and believable plots and they get a "meh" from readers.

I have to wonder why this happens and the only thing I can come up with is, those really great stories just don't somehow hit what I call "hot buttons." Those intangible turnons that make readers "feel" somehow.

Like A Candle In The Wind is a perfect example of a story that is VERY well written, free from grammar errors, has great character development and a really solid plotline... yet there are very few kudos and the hits are low.

If you've never read it, go do so and then tell me I am right... or wrong in my assessment of the story.

Here's a link: https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/3209/like-candle-wind...

Catherine Linda Michel

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