. . . sorta

First draft of my story, all the way through. Although some tinkering as I go getting the place I last worked. About 80KB. Almost short for me.

It needs mellowing and proofing still. Pretty sure I'll cringe when I read what passes for dialog in this draft, but the thought is there so I'm gonna leave it alone for a day or so.

Now's when I wish Brandy was still around so I could get a reality check and gain the benefit of her command of language, plot and dialog. Oh well, guess you're all stuck with me.

Anyone wanna beta test?

warm furry hugs

Tiggs