I posted the final chapter of “Rosemary” and as much as I want to like it I feel like it’s incomplete.
Maybe I could have shown more, but there are things that the narrator just doesn’t know so she can’t connect or comment to us about it at the time
The dad doesn’t express a lot of lovey-Dovey feelings; a thing actually shared with the male side of my family-so it’s included here as well.
I wanted to be a bit more real life and maybe a bit ambiguous (as we don’t know how life is going to go) and that there is less than a two year gap between this story and Aranu’tiq
So my question is:
Was the final chapter good enough to conclude the story for now?
Comments
Seemed Fine to Me...
...in terms of finishing things off.
Don't know what you meant by less than a two year gap between this story and Aranu’tiq. Is Rosemary's a prequel to an existing story?
Eric
i liked the ending
seemed pretty good to me, although it sounds like you will be visiting these characters again, which is also cool.