Hello everyone, I am writing this here Book book called "The Promotion" and as some you know 5 of it chapter's have already been posted. I was wondering how some of you think about it. Since it is my first time seriously writing something and I want what I need to improve myself on.
My new book "The Promotion"
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Am I mistsken,...
or English is not your native language?
Yes it is...
What are you implying?
Grammar
No one is trying to insult you at all. What we are observing is that there are some sentence structure issues and people are trying to be helpful to aid you in fixing that. No insult intended. Many of us started out not writing very well, me back in the 1980's. Please, just relax and accept the help offered.
Gwen
"when are you due"
And that was a little like asking a woman "when are you due", and getting an icy stare in return. ;-)
Kris
{I leave a trail of Kudos as I browse the site. Be careful where you step!}
May I suggest
That in the first instance you look at the formatting of your story. It may be an issue between the software that you use to write the story and bigcloset, but when published, a single block of text with lots of speeches does not make for an easy read.