She knew how to treat him - exactly as he deserved...
He made his living meeting women and giving them what they wanted. But what did the woman in the Mercedes want and would he be willing to give it? And if he did, what would he become.
An erotic tale of lust, greed and transformation on the Gilded Coast as a young man looking for a sugar mama finds out what life is like as an object of desire.
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Just so everyone knows
Morgan Preece is me. It's the name I use for out-and-out erotica.
And Mercedes is one of the ORIGINAL BigCloset stories because it was written in 1997, almost two years before I started BC.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Content may not be everyone's cup of tea
However, the talented use of language is incredibly well done.
Derp!!!
OMG!!! This was one of the very first tales I read on line! As I remember it was amazingly and wonderfully obscene. In other words...it was a fun and brilliant read.
May Your Hand Not Fail...
Kelly the Blushing
Thanks
I'm glad you enjoyed it. The first part was fun to write; I had the whole story in my head from the beginning but it got increasingly hard to maintain the same tone of naughty fun mixed with satire throughout. This edition is re-edited with a few typos corrected and some words changed for better flow. Almost twenty years has changed the world considerably but the club scene in and around Newport Beach still exists. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.