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Just posted Chapter Two of TRI. Chapter Three Tomorrow,
Cheers!
Diana M Howe, Moongoddess at Large
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Suggestion:
Label them as Chapter one and two.
Loven the story.
Wendy Jean
Working on it as we speak ;)
Cheers,
Diana M. Howe, Moongoddess at Large
yay!
read it, liked it!
Dorothy
Chapter Three Today :)
Cheers,
Diana M. Howe, Moongoddess at Large
Generally a good read
Bought the Kindle version. Has formatting issues where some paragraphs were center aligned or sentences were split between lines in strange ways. Some spelling errors but not excessively so, mostly 'causalities' or 'ordinance' when it was probably 'casualties' or 'ordnance' respectively, unless the main characters were superlawyers or something, arming themselves with the county codes? ;-).
And Ni-cad batteries in a hybrid?!
But it is a good fun read.
Thank You for your Comments and observations
Your first line " Bought the kindle edition" Made my day :) . Unfortunately the formatting as well as many of the fine details were at the Publishers end, I had to pay them to make the Kindle. I hope it doesn't interfere with your enjoyment too much.
Cheers,
Diana M. Howe, Moongoddess at Large
P.S. Really Big Ni-Cads