Wanted: Proof-reader/editor

Hi all,

I've recently decided to really start trying to write, and today wrote the first chapter of my first story. I am however a bit nervous about posting it, and unsure about which rating to choose. As such I hoped someone would be willing to help me a bit by reading it and pointing out grammar/spelling mistakes and offering general feedback. In return for this you will have eternal fame (delivered in the form of a thank-you in each story post), and of course my gratitude.

Regards,

LucyBass

Edit: Thanks all, I've received a lot of offers and advice, I will try to contact/thank everyone personally tonight.