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"The brighter the light, the darker the shadows."
an Idea I have been toying with ever since I started writing RWDWP, and Healing Mishap. I create a cast, a motley crew of individuals from varying backgrounds and set them against a force deemed "Evil" however I have noticed a something.
one of the major villains is ecclesiastical in nature. Always.
whether it is Derrik and Lanzerus, or the unnamed non-magician in RWDWP. I don't hate church, or religion for that matter, it just seems so easy to take something offering so much and twist it into a force of darkness. It is a simple idea we have all understood since we were little, [refer to the title of blog-post]
I also noticed my plots don't flow very well.
They flow like a river broken periodically by sharp jagged rocks that I think throw some readers off from wanting to read my works. Also taking a six month break didn't help with that at all. I think I might take down RWDWP and rework it. With a more jointed plot and semblence of coherence that I feel as an earlier work doesn't quite have, I think I might draw a little more attention.
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So I have decided ^^
Yes, I thought about it for awhile, and I had commented on chapter 11 that I would be working on reviving RWDWP.
unfortunately, I am going to be going about it by rewriting it, it will still follow the same gist, however I feel it will be much better in quality and flow.
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