I'm a rambin' again!

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Telling a story.

I write stories, I like writing...no love writing, but know my limitations.

There have been millions of books published, some good, some not so good. I often wonder whether I could become a published author, in the main stream, like many others. Then I see the hoops you have to go through to even get an agent let alone a publisher. I know that you can self publish, but it isn’t the route to massive success unless you are very lucky and have huge talent, both of which, I regret, I have not got.

When I read my stories, I think that I am quite a good story teller but not someone who could think of making a financial success out of writing. You could argue that many published authors make very little out if their writings but still do it. That begs the question, why do publishers take on authors who will not make much money for them? I suppose it’s all a bit of a lottery, really. Maybe they think that there will be another JKR around the corner? She was rejected more than once before being accepted as were many other authors like Frederick Forsyth.

As far as my stories go, I feel that they lack depth, my descriptive skills are limited and my characters somewhat necessarily shallow. That is the problem with writing short or episodic stories, you are always in a hurry to get to the end and at the same time trying to keep the attention of the reader. You simply do not get time to go deeply into the psyche of the character or describe in any great detail what, where and who everything or everyone is.

I read some books where you are on page 20 before you get to the nuts and bolts of the story. You just can’t do that with short stories, you have to get to the meat of it virtually straight away, grab your audience by the scruff of the neck and pull them along with you.

I love descriptive writing, where an author can paint a picture in words and transport the writer to far off places and situations where a reader can feel a part of the story, even only as an observer. I do my best with my stories and maybe one day I will write that great novel but I won’t hold my breath.

For now, I am happy that so many people have read my stories and either commented, voted or kudo’d them. The fact that I have had nearly a million hits — although I know not all of them are actual reads - countless votes and many kudos, shows that what I have done can’t be all that bad!

It is nice that I have been able find a place for me to scratch my itch. BCTS is a home to me, a home where I can put my thoughts into words and allow what talents I have to be put on view. I thank Erin and her team for the work and sacrifice that they have put into making this the most successful and friendly place to read and write our stories.

Sorry about the rambling nature of this blog. I am just putting thoughts into words for those of you who are kind enough to read my stories. Anyway, back to the grind otherwise my great editor Gabi will want to know why I am wasting time writing this drivel and not completing the latest “Thief” chapter!

Hugs
Sue

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Take your time, Girl,

Take your time, Girl, there's no need to rush. Just shunt your chapters in my direction when you are ready.

Hugs,
Gabi.


“It is hard for a woman to define her feelings in language which is chiefly made by men to express theirs.” Thomas Hardy—Far from the Madding Crowd.

Gabi.


“It is hard for a woman to define her feelings in language which is chiefly made by men to express theirs.” Thomas Hardy—Far from the Madding Crowd.

I feel the same!

I love to write! Since I lost my leg and had to slow down some of the things I do (I just don't walk that well with the prosthetic-yet!), I have really begun to put myself more into writing. I had hidden my female self away for so long, and it was starting to drive me insane. Thanks to Big Closet, I have found an outlet for my feelings, and people who can undeerstand how I feel!
I love your stories, and the way they carry me away to a different world. And yes, I can't wait for the next "thief" story either, so get to work! LOL! Just kidding, I know that getting a muse to go to work can be a chore in itself. Sometimes, I have problems putting two words together, and then there are those times when I just cannot get my fingers to write fast enough. I even went out and bought a new keyboard to help me write faster!
Have fun, I'll be there, ready to read whatever you do!

Love,
Wren

You are better me

I am "adequate" at best in my writing. Having read some of yours, you are a lot better. But your assessment is right in one respect - getting published is at best a long shot, even for someone as clearly talented as you. On the other hand, the world's loss is our gain here at big closet.

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Your stories, short or serial, have been enjoyable bon mots. It is always pleasant to see a new episode. You talk about taking 20 pages to find out what the nuts and bolts are of a story; that fast? That is probably one of the reasons my stories are so unpopular. They take a lot of reading to get to the main ideas. The fact they run from 85,000 - 150,000 words probably has something to do with it. Your stories are wonderful, and display a great imagination. I think you have found a great niche, and should stay with it. Please keep them coming.

Portia

Portia

Print publishing is hard now days.

I tried to publish a book back in the late 80's; even got some favorable responses; just do this or do that, and we will talk. Now, so many years later, I wonder what I was thinking. Getting published in print now days is really, really hard.

Still, I think that you are one author that could do it; though we both know that mainstream media is not ready for the T genre. But, I think that one day, someone will break through, and it could be you. I know it won't be me. LOL I really like your stories. It was so fun to follow the story through Google Earth; actually seeing some of the country through which the children traveled in, "The Green Fog". It was a neat gimmic and great fun.

I am really looking forward to what you write after your break.

Much peace

Khadijah

Grass is always greener

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Maybe the grass is always greener? I wish I could write a serial or short story. Unfortunately, it doesn't work for me. It takes me a couple of thousand words to say 'good morning' sometimes on paper. I've always admired those who can deliver a serial and still keep the plot and drama flowing (as you do). The advantage of the light touch approach to description is that the readers imagination paints in the blanks giving far more realistic a depiction that over describing can do.

And I look forward to the stories that generate the next million hits!



"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."

No Ramblin

RAMI

Dear Sue:

Go for it. Your stories are all interesting and well written and you would likely find an audience willing to purchase your stories.

I enjoyed the Green Fog, as you could note from my comments. I think with a little tweeking here or there it might be able to reach a general audience. I think as a Sci Fi story and taking the age of the protagonists, that the TG element would not have to be changed, except perhaps at the end where a more general audience might favor a cure being found for the plague.

SO go ahead and see what happens if you submit that story. The worse that happens is rejection letters. The best is a series of 7 Green Fog movies.

RAMI

RAMI

Short stories

Are actually harder to write than longer ones, Precision, economy, all of that comes in and makes it difficult. Don't knock yourself at all! If Dan Brown's prose is unfortunately deathless, then...ah, you know what I mean, and youknow I mean it nicely.

Ramblin Entertainment

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Have you considered trying for the Young Adult fiction market? There's some incredible fiction being published in this category, and you have a real knack for writing teenagers. I think a story similar to FOOTBALL GIRL could be very popular among young readers who are moving beyond children's fare if it was written from the point of view of a genetic girl- maybe she gets picked up by a women's pro team first and somehow winds up breaking into the men's league. Even without Sue's gender issues there's plenty of exciting stuff going on; celebrity craziness, young love, family drama, a nasty villian. And then once established, if you wanted to do one with a young t.g character (I've read a couple that have been published in hardback-), you've already proven you're stuff is marketable. I don't think your stories are "shallow", they may not ponder the great riddles of existance for pages on end but there's an emotional richness to them, young characters facing the kind of real stuff that gets faced by people their age (or in the case of a more improbable adventure like the GREEN FOG, it's the kind of quest they can project themself into...). And the fact that the pacing of the story is more cinematic than like some heavy literature could well be a plus for this market. Just a thought anyway. Writing something that helps get young people interested in reading seems like a very noble pursuit, not to mention that you get to propagandize impressionable young minds with subversive notions like being true to yourself and decent to that Paki kid that everyone's picking on, or whatever...

I had a kind of spiritual breakdown that forced me to take a break from reading anything t.g. for a while, and picking up Football Girl again here in the new season has been a real treat. Now I gotta go back and find out what was going on with that weird fog, and how they're getting along in Pennemarris...
~~~hugs, Veronica

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Canada and Mexico.
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Golly...(Wasn't this by the Allman Sisters?).

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Golly she is a ramblin' girl...
with each new story she sets our hearts awhirl
Football, Fog and Changes
we watch her tales unfurl
Lord she is a ramblin' girl!


Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena

  

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