Do you ever just feel like screaming at your keyboard?

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You know, things like "Stupid keyboard! MAKE WORDS!" ;-)

I've been ... Well, not exactly stuck per se, but having difficulty finding the right words for the next scene of my next chapter of Robin. I have the entire chapter in my head, and I can see each scene playing out, but somewhere between there and my fingers it's just not coming across as clearly as I'd like.

I'm told that writing something - anything helps to get the creative juices flowing, so I thought I'd post something on the Writers' forum about it, and see if that doesn't knock something loose.

The only thing more irritating than Writer's Block is sand in your shorts, but having the whole chapter just jumping up and down waving and screaming at you to pay attention, while not being able to get it 'right' is definitely up there ^_^

Here's hoping for something readable in the next couple of days >_>

~Zoe

Oh yeah, I know how you

Oh yeah, I know how you feel! Between the various versions I must have written around 30,000 words on my Halloween story, and I never did get it right. My own fault, though, as I was trying to make it funny. I really suck at funny. Well, writing it, anyway.

Oh well, maybe I can make something out of it in time for next Halloween?

Saless 


Kittyhawk"But it is also tradition that times *must* and always do change, my friend." - Eddie Murphy, Coming To America


"But it is also tradition that times *must* and always do change, my friend." - Eddie Murphy, Coming To America

I have that problem with horror

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I love to read it, but I just can't write a good horror story. I also have trouble creating villains that stay villainous, but that's another topic entirely ^_^

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I have that problem with opening lines. If the first line feels right everything else flows beautifully from it. If the first line of a chapter doesn't flow, then the whole thing tends to feel forced and either ends up as a scrap idea to come back too or in the recycle bin of my desktop.

When things get really bad I resort to mint choc chip ice cream. It doesn't write the words but it makes me feel less bothered about my being stuck. That being said, if I wrote more prolifically I'd have seriously piled on the kilos tackling writers block!! ;-)

Fingers crossed that the words come to you! I enjoy my little fixes of Robin's world.



"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."

Ah hah. That's part of it right there!

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I remember now, that I was planning on making some changes to how the opening scene started instead of just diving in head-first. I'd forgotten about the changes until reading this, but I knew SOMETHING just did not feel right at all.

Thanks so much! Now I can rewrite the opening and get on with the rest of the chapter ^_^

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My pleasure! :-)

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My pleasure! :-)



"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."

Opening lines

That is where the bulk of my horror story came from, the opening line.

No, but...

I sing in the car and talk to the radio!

Mr. Ram

Perhaps...

Perhaps this will help.

____ approaches may prove fruitful for you.
1) Outlining - if you know the broad outline of what it is you want to say. Jot it down. SOMETIMES the effort of describing where you're going (or at least think you're going) is enough to get things started.
2) Editor - If you have a good editor (Not saying proofer here, but someone that asks you the hard questions so you can write the answers for the readers. Use the editor. Talk to him/her about what you're trying to do/where you're trying to go.
3) Write something else. Believe it or not, sometimes taking a step back, and writing something else is all it takes. The something else can be related - say something that happens 2-3 chapters later - or be totally unrelated.

One thing a lot of these have in common is that they cause you to take a step back from where you're blocked. A common problem - when blocked - is for the sub conscious to get in the way. You get a hic-up. The FCD (Sorry - I'll describe him in a minute) decides it's too hard, and won't let you get any further that, or he's decided your story should go a different direction.

FCD = File Clerk Dude... Basically he's a way to think about your sub conscious that is effective to some folks. Think of him as a teen boy (even for us girls - this works) and he's got a stack of playboy magazines sitting there and he's basically lazy and... Well, you get the picture. You're NOT going to get his attention short of a big chunk of wood up side the head. You may be able to figure out an analogous female FCD, but I've not been able to, nor has the girl that explained him to me (and before you ask, she was born female, and still is).

So, using the FCD concept to represent your sub conscious. When you're blocked, he's decided that the story's too hard or wrong they way you want to go. In order to get back to writing, you'll have to get him interested in your story again (instead of that stack of magazines). Thus, write something else. He may go "hey, you forgot about this." or write something further down the story line, you could get "Oh, that's interesting, how'd the story get there?" and poof the block's gone.

Of course, you could try meditating, and see if that lets you get in better contact.

Good Luck,
Anne

Oh yeah

I get that, with me If I'm writing something new I'll get blocked or slowed. The thing is that I've got a hard time writing anything new once I'm committed to the thing I've started. I'm going through that right now.

Bailey Summers

here is something out of left field

I ran into this idea, years ago when I was playing around with drawing cartoons and hit writers block, I knew what I wanted to show but I wasnt sure how to explain it. Then I began to realize that everything in life is not seen from a side view of two characters talking. So I changed my perspectives, I started with different angles. Like in movies I did top down shots, isometric angles, lower than eye level stuff, started wondering about how lighting would look, etc. My comics were different and I found new ways to show what I was trying to say.

Movies do this all the time. It might be the slow click of a wall clock, overempahsising the drag of time, adding the over the top boom of the hand moving, then cut away to kids running out of school or whatever scene the director wants to focus on. the point is to get the audience from knowing nothing to your scene without having to explain any background. Just draw them in with something simple and then switch them over to what you want to focus on.

You could do something similar with writing, by describing something that has nothing really to do with the scene but is in the background. Like the sound of an automatic pencils annoying clicking sound or the abundant number of non color-blind friendly posters, or an overly sexual car add on t.v. Something that maybe people see everyday, but never think about. Then roll it right into your scene and run from there.

This might also give you a different perspective on how you want to describe your scene or maybe on a more satisfactory way for you to describe something that is happening. If nothing else it will get you writing and thinking about how you are writing. This helps me to get started sometimes, usually its focused on a heel strapp cutting into my foot, or the sheer look of a sleeve or the way my wig keeps finding its way back into my eye. Any little thing that the main character might think about, that will draw the reader in, and hopefully my inner writer out.

Hope that helps,

Bridget

The last time I screamed at my keyboard...

... was when the computer behind it locked up and for some reason the autosave function also messed up. I lost about 8000 words that I thought I'd never be able to write as well again and I used some language that I'm only glad my kids weren't around to hear.

I know that's not the same as writer's block. The frustrations associated with that are different but just as maddening.

For me, when things don't go right I find the best thing to do is to leave the computer alone for a few hours/days. Find something else to do for a while and don't think about writing or your story. Go for a walk whether it's raining or not and try and let some of the beauty around you flow in rather than trying to force a flow out. Relax and don't worry, you're story will still be there when you get back to it and your muse will be there too (she's probably just on a coffee break).

Alternatively if you HAVE to write, try doing random word doodles. In really boring meetings I used to draw a squiggle in the corner of the page then see what I could make from it by adding other stuff. I ended up with whales and robots and a few quite disturbing faces, but it's amazing how easy it is to tap into that deeper part of you and turn a meaningless squiggle into something. Look out the window and say what you see. Write it down. Then write something related and keep building. It may be rubbish but it's a bit like running the water to clear the pipes, before long things should start working again.

Maeryn Lamonte, the girl inside

I had something similar

I had something similar happen during NaNoWriMo in 2007. I had the program I was using crash, and as a result I lost about 10,000 words. I ended up recovering from that (and squeeked by the 50,000 word marks) and eventually tried the software I was using again, and now it's rock solid.

If I get writers block, I get up and go do something else. Sometimes, I'll try changing the venue in which I'm writing. If I'm at home and having trouble, I'll go to a coffee shop and write there. I've actually just sat in the car with the laptop and tried to write somewhere that I normally wasn't to see if that would help. Sometimes it does, other times not so much.

Kayla