Sometimes, you just gotta tweak a story...

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Ma'at, Part 4, is one of my favorite chapters. In trying to get back into writing, I've been reviewing what I already posted.

The last few pages of Part 4 have been revised to fill out the ending a bit.

Hope you all enjoy it.

Nicole ( a.k.a. Itinerant, ...)

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Maybe? Whaddya mean

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Maybe?

Whaddya mean MAYBE!!!

Nicole (a.k.a. Itinerant)

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Veni, Vidi, Velcro:
I came, I saw, I stuck around.

Nicole (a.k.a. Itinerant)

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Veni, Vidi, Velcro:
I came, I saw, I stuck around.

It's ALIVE !

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Wow ! I got a responce.

How's the motels?

Did they come with one of those Belgian waffle makers you rotate a half turn?

John in Wauwatosa with thunder booming in the west and a tornado right behind. Oh Joy.

P.S. Is your revised chapter four posted already?

P.P.S. My Dad killed my printer.

No, it's not!

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Ahem!

Now hear this!

"Tornados suck!"

So does staying in a motel.

The revised Chapter 4 has replaced the original chapter 4.

Your printer gave its life in a noble cause ... probably. I'll bet your cats are the fiendish minds behind its demise.

Nicole (a.k.a. Itinerant)

--
Veni, Vidi, Velcro:
I came, I saw, I stuck around.

Nicole (a.k.a. Itinerant)

--
Veni, Vidi, Velcro:
I came, I saw, I stuck around.

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