Okay... I have a story that is Novella length, has several chapters and I have no idea if I am going to revise it for an attempt at publication. Do you all want to see it?
It is my first long piece and it is a bit rough, but I would be posting it to get it out there more than anything else. It also has some fun construction issues that might throw people as well, but hopefully people can cope.
So, wanna read it?
Comments
Why not?
...what have you got to lose? And surely we've all got something to gain if you do. Have at it, dear one!
She was born for all the wrong reasons but grew up for all the right ones.
Possa Dio riccamente vi benedica, tutto il mio amore, Andrea
Love, Andrea Lena
What she said!
Lay it on us!
Don't be Such a Wallflower
Oh go on, girl. Give it a whirl! What's the worst the people here can do other than call you all sorts of silly names.
Besides, I suspect you're made of sterner stuff than most.
So let us have it.
Nancy
"You may be what you resolve to be."
T.J. Jackson
*sniff* But silly names make
*sniff*
But silly names make me cry.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Yes!
Show us, what else can I say?
Well... if you are all for
Well... if you are all for it... then I guess i have to agree.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
No! Don't do it!
A story should be a work of art. You owe it to yourself to make certain it's as good as can be. Anyone can throw up a load of old crap and say "It's rough but you asked for it."
Finish the story and get it right.
The thing is, the story is
The thing is, the story is finished and when I finished it in 2003-4 it was right. Now compared to how I write now it is a little rough. It is still a work of art, but one that shows where I have been as opposed to where I am.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
If you're not sure...
Why not draft one or two (okay, ask one or two people nicely) to give it a read - directly. And provide early feedback. It might help you make a decision.
Food for thought.
Annette