Revised autobiography is ready for a review

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Okay, I have taken the advice I have been given about my autobiography, and I think its better now. Now, I need someone to go over it and help me fix whatever mistakes are left. Any takers?

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I'll give it a go.

Patricia Marie Allen's picture

Send it to my email address and PM me here when you've done it and I'll get to it as soon as I get it.

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