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One of the things I'm wondering about is if I'm making Archie a little too broken here in the beginning. I mean, yes part of writing fiction is torturing your characters for fun and profit. That said, I wonder if I'm being too hard on Archie too soon.
Things aren't going to get better anytime soon. Archie's story has some miles to go before it's done.
Just wondering...
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Good start
Don't worry, let the story tell itself.
No second guessing
yourself. Just remember you have to have some glimmers of hope to balance the darkness. Archie's attitude did a lot of that in the first chapter. Perhaps he'd given up, but he was determined not to cause hurt to his granddad. He has a nobility of spirit.
You're doing good!
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Grover
It's set up.
Let the story run with it.
Maggie
If there's one thing...
If there is one thing i have learned from my friend about writing a characters story its this: The character will tell you what its doing, you just tell it to others for them. I actually like to read stories with alot of issues. it adds to the intrigue of the plot and lets me think more about who this character is.
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Without some darkness in it it's just some porno story (wanted to put that better couldn't think of how) so I say let the story run it's course.
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