I'm glad I bought it but it did leave a lot to be desired compared to the original. Needs more back story and a better conclusion. Not a different one just more detail to support the story. It seemed a bit washed out. Maybe because I've read the original several times before buying the commercial book. I did like it though. It wasn't a waste of money. and it has the advantage that I can share it with my non kinky (open minded) friends who like to read but would be appalled by a TG story. I'm sure the next one you "translate" to commercial will be better. You have an amazing talent and I like reading your stories a lot.