Homecoming Princess, (revised) I'm mentioning it because Arecee shuffled off this mortal coil some years ago, you have to suspend belief a little, but then we do that for most fiction. I just thought that newer readers who have never heard of some of the older writers, may not be aware of the content that this amazing site has to offer.
Anyway, it's a sweet story so no nasties or sex, but give it a try and while you are doing so the rest of us can pretend that he's still alive and enjoying your pleasure in his writing. Leave a comment it may stimulate others to look.
Comments
Arecee was always a joy to read.
They had some very fun stories, and only seemed to get better over time.
*hugs*
Melanie E.
I had lost track of the story
somewhere near the end on a cliffhangar, then found it again several years later, It is one of his best...
Quintessential Arecee
Arecee once solicited advice via PM on how he could improve his writing. I sent him three or four suggestions.
His answer, "Or, I could take a walk on the beach."
Jill
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
First Chapter, Cute Story
Noticed a typical male mistake.
"I looked and tried to stifle a giggle. The bra looked silly on my flat chest. Mindy took some pantyhose from her drawer and pushed them into the bra cups. It looked better"
Nylons, socks, scarf(s) etc. would kinda work but not pantyhose. Think of stuffing tights into a brassier as filler. On a blog weeks back there was a long discussion and lots of comments on what could fill a bra if one didn't have Mother Nature's natural filler. I know these stories are make believe. Certainly entertaining and fun to read. They are posted for everyone to enjoy with the author receiving no momentary reward and seldom having an editor before posting. My comment is only for future stories from BCTS writers who "stuff" a bra. Some errors are more noticeable to some and not others.
Hugs Angharad
Oklahoma born and raised cowgirl