I was away for a few days but returned to read reviews on my two parting stories "Spinal Tap" and "For Daddy"
These are both objectionable scenarios I admit, which is why I posted them, and posted them when I did.
As a general rule I dislike torture of any kind. I prefer my gender-crossers to be driven by circumstance or persuasion. You will find only three other forced change stories in the 218 stories I have posted here (I think - standing to be corrected).
The thing about "Spinal Tap" is that the mother did it for love, but then there was another...
I did not dwell on the pain, just her crazy justification of her actions. I don't think that my violence was gratuitous.
"For Daddy" is supposed to be creepy - all the creepier because he is telling the story. He may be disgusted, but at the end of the day this is a man (I have said it before) dragged through life by his cock. She is just sad - a child looking for love and thinking that the only way she can find it is by being sexually attractive to her own father.
It is designed to be disturbing.
Thanks to those who have said that the admire the writing even if they dislike the stories.
For those who hated everything about them, don't worry, More happy romances follow.
Maryanne
Nasty Material
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Good Content
Your stories are better than the vast majority of what is offered on cable. My spouse and I search that vast wasteland every evening: Netflix, Disney, HBO, Amazon Prime, etc.
Not everyone likes every story. There's not a thing you can do about that.
Congratulations on practicing your craft.
Jill
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
My Nasty Material
I've written nasty, even brutal, stories. I think there's an unwritten rule here: "If you're provoked to wrath, don't flame, write a story."
I'm thinking of a couple of my stories. I began SRU: Reforming the Brat over a decade ago, in some kind of bitter mood that I've completely forgotten. I was motivated three-and-two-thirds years ago (by someone here on BCTS) to finally finish and post it.
Vengeance and Beyond took only three or so weeks from provocation to posting. Revenge against someone acquitted in trial of a crime (not caught red-handed on video) enraged me. I did manage to write a coherent story. Commenters did appreciate it, even if it wasn't to their taste.
A lot of us do this, I think. So there's no shame in writing disturbing material.
-- Daphne Xu
Please don't misunderstand
I do not hate you in any way shape or form. I merely want to run those two 'mothers' from spinal tap through a meat grinder *shrug* Though my biggest message was DO NOT TAKE EXPIRED HORMONES. I wasn't kidding when I said I almost died with those. Like that's dangerous as hell and I pray anyone reading your stories or anywhere on this site would understand that is a risk NOT worth taking. That the mother was not only a megalomaniac but an idiot for giving her kids those
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