I need a fill-in story reviewer / possible collaborator

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I have a long story in work that Dawn Jehs was reviewing / collaborating with me on. As a previous post noted, I haven't heard from her for many months, and the lack of someone from whom I can get feedback has really affected my writing. While I don't want to replace Dawn's role, I do need to get someone to assist with this. The role is reviewing chapters or sections as they get written, reviewing / assisting with the story outline, offering suggestions, and generally helping keep me on track.

The story is a blackmail-type forced feminization; the protagonist's company and assets are at stake thanks to a false allegation in a social environment where a mere accusation can ruin a man or his company. A contract is offered to not sue - if he can ride out the terms designed to humiliate him as much as possible. Even his wife doesn't believe his side, and she's in on the 'punishment'.

If someone could help, I'd be very, very grateful. Note that if Dawn does reappear, a volunteer won't be pushed aside, but will still assist. If you do volunteer, I want to know your authoring or editing or reviewing credentials. This is a story I might publish, so I want to make it as polished as possible.