(Three-Ring Circus) ^2 [i.e., squared]: Need Feedback, PLEASE

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So, I've been working on a side project and I am not sure what to do with it.

As you may have read from some of Barb's feedback, I have developed a somewhat unique writing style that can be as confusing to the reader as it is to me as the writer. At least I think I have that working now--thanks to my favorite work, Amadea.

So, I decided to try something new--as a challenge to myself. I started writing a story that not only rotates through a set of character's points of view (like Amadea, etc.), but also rotates between two story lines that will ultimately merge. So, far (still only about halfway through) it seems to be working and somehow making sense.

So, here is my question--what do I do with this monster?

I have gone back a bit to my writing roots--it is based on more of a forced femme scenario (but not hard core), which typically does not resonate greatly with the BC audience. It also stretches reality just a bit--certainly still feasible 'sci-fi', but...out there...

So, ...

Broken! is coming to an end. I don't want to put the effort into posting this, though, if it doesn't seem like something that readers are interested in. Don't get me wrong, I am going to finish the story for me--but that is a huge difference from proofing, editing, formatting, etc., for posting...

I know I will likely never get the reaction I got from Amadea (although Barbie got close), but this is not really a feel good story. It is full of mystery and intrigue...and some forced 'discovery'...

Anyway, let me know if there is interest. If so, I will try and clean it up. If not, I am not mad at not having to clean it up. :)

Maybe just let me know? (I also thought about putting it on Erin's Patreon).

Thanks and huge HUGS!
S

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