One question that is puzzling me here is why do i need to choose a author name when posting a blog or a story here under my account name? Its a minor issue really but one that got irritating here. I forget that field the other night when posting and when I had to go back and choose one, my wireless Ethernet failed me and it took an hour to get it back running. It has really been giving me trouble lately and I cant figure that out. It isnt Erins fault its the wireless bridges.

My request is I would love someone to help me by reading my story carefully and giving me some general pointers on exactly what points i need to improve on and how I can go by doing that. I know one of my biggest weak points is sentence structure and spelling. my skills there are so weak I have been told english must not be my main language lol. If it isnt, what is. I was born in Illinois. ive spoken it all my life. I just have a disability in that area