Reading part 1 and 2 some time back, although this is the first time I have seen part 3. Glad to see you continuing the story as I always wished to see more of it. As for the editing, I noticed several glitches that cause me to stop and reread parts to catch what you meant. Not complaining, just pointing out that if you really wanted to publish, and I think the story is worthy of publishing, it it could use more polish.