I posted the final chapter of “Rosemary” and as much as I want to like it I feel like it’s incomplete.
Maybe I could have shown more, but there are things that the narrator just doesn’t know so she can’t connect or comment to us about it at the time

The dad doesn’t express a lot of lovey-Dovey feelings; a thing actually shared with the male side of my family-so it’s included here as well.

I wanted to be a bit more real life and maybe a bit ambiguous (as we don’t know how life is going to go) and that there is less than a two year gap between this story and Aranu’tiq

So my question is:
Was the final chapter good enough to conclude the story for now?