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I didn't want to clutter up the front page with a mediocre story so I replaced part 1 with the whole story.
- Terry
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now who said it was mediocre story terry i was finding the first part pretty good so dont put your self down
well hugs from sarav
Do you need a spanking?
Terry what is wrong with you? I'm about half-way finished the story and it is just as sweet a story as any here! Poor little William and pretty lil' Grace. A very nice idea to link his clumsiness with how he's dressed. Even more so with his mother at her wit's end trying to figure it out. I really like how she had him try on different costumes trying to see what worked and what didn't! Very very nice! I haven't gotten to the end yet, but I want to know why you thought this was only mediocre? Perhaps a pic of a dancing child in a tutu would help it get more attention but that has nothing to do with how good the story is. READ CAREFULLY: Terry this is good!
Hugs!
grover
Hopefully
my comment on the initial story wasn't one of the ones that put you off about it.
I've just left another after finishing the whole thing, but I'll go ahead and say a piece here: the story was fun to read, and it was very sweet. The characters grew as the story progressed, and in the end everything was okay for everybody involved, so how can you ask for more from a story?
Melanie E.
What's this stuff?
about 'cluttering up the front page' and 'mediocre'?
Rubbish - or something unprintable.
"In my Sister's Footsteps", "The Magic of Love", "Distant Queen'; the list goes on. These are all wonderful stories with gentle humour and well-observed scenes and characters.
And as for Claude and Grace, I enjoyed episode one and will no doubt enjoy the rest when it's not half past two in the morning and my body is telling me that its bedtime.
Susie