I wanted to let my readers know that I am committed to my stories. I have some breathing room from my day job this coming week, so there should be some progress made on one or both of the stories.
I've finished a rewrite of Chapter 1 of Naruto's Rebirth. I'm working to make the story more accessible to people unfamiliar with Naruto. This is based on reader feedback on early chapters.
Naruto's Rebirth Spoiler...Sasuke will be making his return appearance in Chapter 27 along with his son. What will Sakura think? How will Naruto who is posing as Kushina react to seeing the guy he searched for for so long?
Ranma's Perversion...I've gotten a lot of great feedback on this story. Since it is a pet project I'm doing as time allows, it will get updated slightly less frequently, but I do have plans for the story line. Will Ranma be a boy or girl at the marriage interview? What will happen when Ryoga finally catches up?
Anyway, keep reading and providing feedback!
--PDXGuy
Comments
Get writing!!!
I can't wait for more of Naruto's Rebirth. I am kind of concerned that you're rewriting the first chapter again, though. This makes the third time that you will have restarted the story. If it's just a rewrite of the first chapter that's fine, but I hope you're not planning on rewriting the entire thing - it's a bit of a turn-off to readers to have to reread something several times (says the author currently working on a minor rewrite of one of her own stories, and a major rewrite of another.)
Melanie E.
PS:
What does PDXguy mean?
hahaha
I hear a good story has been rewritten dozens of times, but you may be right. :) PDX is the airport designation of Portland, Oregon. I think you can guess what the other part means. If you like, you can look over my rewrite of chapter 1 and see if it meets your high quality standards! I groan when I read my early dialogues as I was starting this story after a 28 year hiatus from storytelling.
And here I was...
thinking PDX stood for "Paradox" :-)
Annette
Upon reflection
If I were send a liquid metal robot back from the future to change that, I would. Then the PDX would stand for paradox AND the very act would be a paradox which makes it a double-dog-dare super duper no takesbacksies paradox that even Stephen Hawkins and Robert E. Heinlein put together would be unable to unravel.
Update?
Since the last update was 2 years and a half ago, can we assume the stories are "dead"? i've kept checking every few weeks or so hoping to see an update or a status update from the author but nothing.. so yeah... dead i guess.