Nice to see you back.

Don't be afraid to rework something, many of us here are works in progress as writers and picking up good tips as we post.

Still think our hero/heroine was set up and at best is a pawn, a Star Trek red shirt. If she finds the baddie for *the good guys* great but all they need is for her to flush them out. And did they ever test the transformation reversal after a long delay , say the person was in the new body half a year or more? She will be a girl at least all summer and what would you bet against me that they never tested reversing it after even a months delay? Plus this was done using magic, so they said and we all know how wonky it is.

He may be stuck a woman all his life, mind you she is genetically superior in nearly every way but it is still not the life he was used to and would that woman’s offspring be even remotely related to his original genetics? How much of him is there in her? Plus some of *the good guys* treat her very poorly, I fear for her survival.

Great yarn so far, any improvements will only make it better.

John in Wauwatosa

P.S My TOY came today, my Dell Studio XPS, happy happy joy joy