I could use a proof of concept reader. Need someone to tell me if I a crazy or insane. send email addy and I will send you a story. It is not done but is already 16k words. Like my usual stuff.
proof of idea reader
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Not the Concept
May I suggest that nothing's ever wrong with the concept. It's sometimes the details, but more often the implementation.
Insane? More power to you! (I admit that sometimes, things tap my berserk button.)
-- Daphne Xu (a page of contents)
Second That
Plausibility depends on detail.
You're creating the world and its rules.
Years ago, Erin told me that TG readers are amongst the most forgiving in the world when faced with having their disbelief suspended.
I've seen little evidence to dispute her assertion.
Jill
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Third That
Maybe you ought to post it first. You can always revise it after.
It would be a shame if your reader talked you out of writing something you liked.
- io
Well especially in England
Where suspenders hold up a nice pair of sheer hose?
Love, Andrea Lena
Author's discretion
If one is writing fiction it is up to the author what does or doesn't fit into their story line. There will always be readers who want to critique a story because it didn't mesh with how their mind finctionalized said story. It seems Friction, ..., Fiction writers are always ahead of the curve in writing about the future that has yet to be and comes along later. 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea was written long before nuclear subs were even a concept in anyone's mind except Jules Vern.
Write your tale and take as much literary discretion as you wish. Send me your autograph so I can claim I knew you when.
Hugs Paula
Barb
Failure is only if one never tries. Edison didn't fail. As he said, he learned a thousand ways to not make a light bulb.
Oklahoma born and raised cowgirl
To Go Further
That book was written before anyone had any concept of the atomic nucleus -- or at least any observational concept. As far as I know, the first indication appeared when someone put an alpha-emitter in a vacuum chamber, and detected helium accumulating. Specifically, the alpha particle was the He2+ atom, and I think known to be a small dense object. This was before the Rutherford experiment.
Does anyone know the basis of the name "helium"?
-- Daphne Xu (a page of contents)
Helios?
(Mercury) Messenger to the Gods (among other things) could fly? Lighter than air?
Love, Andrea Lena
Wikipedia says:
Helium was named for the Greek Titan of the Sun, Helios,
because:
It was first detected as an unknown, yellow spectral line signature in sunlight, during a solar eclipse in 1868...
but I personally think the name was taken from this delightful ditty,
which I find so soothing + comforting in these worrisome times:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWjyxtTpfRA
~Pogo on! Veronica
What borders on pure insanity?
Canada and Mexico.
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I know two downs and a up
I know two downs and a up make a neutron and two up and one down make a proton. Two rights don't make a left but two wrongs don't make a right either.
Paula
Paula
Seek freedom and become captive of your desires. Seek discipline and find your liberty.
The Coda
Chapterhouse: Dune
Please I have my proof readers
I want to thank everybody who responded to my request. I have chosen two already. Thank you very much.
Paula
Paula
Seek freedom and become captive of your desires. Seek discipline and find your liberty.
The Coda
Chapterhouse: Dune