'Why write such a bitter, ugly, hateful story?'

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That was the one sentence reader comment I got on a story of mine published yesterday at Fictionmania.

What goes around comes around or WGACA for short, was my poke at boy to adult female stories, or more precisely to boy to Mom body swap stories. Many of which have the son soon after becoming Mom going to bed with Dad, or some boyfriend and the former boy being just delighted with what has happened to them. Even happier if the swap is permanent, with maybe a 2 or 3 paragraph pause of unhappiness but that's optional, after all they're a strong powerful adult now.

As magic/sci-fi TG fiction goes, I thought these type of stories took implausibility to new levels for TG fiction. Here are two examples from authors who've written many TG fiction stories, more of them if I read them, I liked more than disliked.

Two main reasons I say for this-

The boy loses 20 to 30 years of life in the exchange

and

These stories find the boy thinking of Mom as some kind of sex symbol. Hormone driven crazy boys aren't going to find their Mom attractive. Someone else's Mom maybe, their own no chance.

I won't fail to point out most kids would rather not think of their parents having sex. If the teen becomes Mom, going to bed with Dad is not what the boy would be aspiring to.

TG fiction is fantasy fiction, but I decided to show the other side of the coin. The least traveled path for this type of story, but perhaps the more realistic.

Truth of it is, if you're transgendered and have all your freedom taken away, what's there to be happy about? I for one if I could be a woman, U wouldn't want my ability to make choices lost. To me it would be the same as being put in prison.

Some readers may agree with what Sarah. I'm just guessing that because of the lack of comments on part two(the finale) the same story at Big Closet. The story received just one.

One thing I'll add. This is one of the few times I've either used mind control or revenge as a major theme in a story of mine. My stories tend to happy endings and less sinister reasons for a person to be transgendered. Nothing like this story where a badly mistaken and vengeful wife changed her husband into a horse for life.

Life isn't always a happy ending. Portraying one in fiction doesn't make a story bitter, ugly, or hateful.

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