Okay, the whole, "I'm going to let you in on every little secret" idea isn't working. It all came down to almost fifty scene cuts and made it nearly impossible for even me to follow, AND I WROTE THE DANG THING!
Experiment: Failure
What am I going to do tonight? Same thing I do every night, Try to take over.... I mean, Cut out all the garbage and tell it like a damn flowing story.
I will show off some twists in the end.
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take over
Try to take over the world!
I believe that is from Pinky and the Brain cartoon! (brain brain)
Hugs,
Jenna From FL
Hugs,
Jenna From FL
Moderator/Editor
TopShelf BigCloset
It is a long road ahead but I will finally become who I should be.
pinky
by the way I love that cartoon!
Hugs,
Jenna From FL
Hugs,
Jenna From FL
Moderator/Editor
TopShelf BigCloset
It is a long road ahead but I will finally become who I should be.
Brain on the brain
They’re Pinky and the Brain
Yes, Pinky and the Brain
One’s a genius, the other’s insane
To prove their mousy worth,
They’ll overthrow the earth
They’re dinky
They’re Pinky and the Brain Brain Brain Brain…
NARF!!!
Put the candle back ....
Inspired by the Man From Wisconsin whom we all know :).
But seriously, if it doesn't work out adjust your product back into something that works.
I love your stuff by the way.
Kim