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Hi all I posted a story this morning named "Ultimatum" that I later took down. I believe that it needed more context to make it understandable. I am working on a companion piece that I more than likely will use Ultimatum as the preface for. Sorry to have confused anyone!
Hugs for all who wants them!
grover
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Nice to see how your mind works
That's fine,
it was an intersting bit but it did come out of no-where in a way.
It seems obvious a serium to *fix* the *genetic flaws* in TG and homosexuals was found and forcefully used to *cure* them. The science was flawed and it ended up making many of them superhuman, oops!
They fight back and beat their oppressors into the ground. With some background this could be a nice sci-fi thriller.
Never be afraid to post and them change your mind. Randalynn did it, so have others who's work I admire here. Sometimes you don't catch a mistake until late. At some point I will likely yank Sgt Joe , when I get the revised parts of the muti-thread story up.
I will read the revised story promptly once posted.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Thanks John
I'm working on that Thriller right now but maybe more of a military drama? Thanks again for the kind words.
grover