Hi folks.
Just thought I'd let you know that I have posted some more words for your delectation on Fictioneer called The Tank, so if you're after something a little different, check it out here.
Please?
Oh, and if you're of a mind, there's a review of Paycheck a movie I saw recently and after reading the review, I'm hoping you're going to want to see it too. You can check that out here
Have fun.
NB
PS
All feedback (provided it's not abusive) appreciated :)
Comments
Very good, Nick
The Tank reminded me of a stort version of the Pit and the Pendelum/Cask of Amontilado at first, then ended like an episode of The Twilight Zone. The ending really got to me.
Bravo,
John in Wauwatosa
P.S. Hope this means we wil see more of your work soon.
John in Wauwatosa
Who knows?
I'm trying to slog my way through this damned web design course, but every now and again, I get the urge, you know, to write something.
Haven't had anything TG related pop into my head recently though.
Hopefully soon, or you'll all forget me.
I don't just look it, I'm totally brain dead
I've Said It Before
I won't give too much away or it would be a spoiler. Suffice to say it's vintage Nick.
Good to see you writing Nick. Anything! Even if it's not what you're supposed to be doing.
I don't think you'll be forgotten.....missed, yes,
Joanne
Thanks Joanne
I just wish I could get my head into gear and write with the voracity I have been able to write with so much in the past. It almost seems like I'm in the middle of a drought.
Muses huh? What can you do. Can't live with them, can't live without 'em.
I don't just look it, I'm totally without a muse
The Tank
So glad I took a look at this one. It was ......... Well here, I'm gonna be lazy and just repost my comment at FICTIONEER:
Wow Nick, That was excellent. Economical, every word moving it forward, just enough background. A just about perfect short story.
~~hugs, laika
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around that you could post there. It's great little site, and could be even better with the talent I see here...
Well shit, I guess it really CAN happen here..,
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Tanks, Laika
Again, I'm really glad you liked it.
Like Laika says, you BC authors with some um... 'straight' material should give Fictioneer a go and help make it the site I for one know it can be...
I don't just look it, I'm like so totally into writing fiction