Long time no post!

I have been working on a new story that I'm pretty proud of and will be posting it today. I plan on putting this up on the Kindle Store and a few other Epub sites soon, but wanted to offer it free on Big Closet first. I'm looking for feedback on the story and what you think might make it better.

I have not split it into chapters yet, only breaks, so that will be changing before publication.

On another note. I haven't posted a story in a while. I have not had time to write TG fiction (which I've always just written for fun), because I've been spending most of my keyboard time writing screenplays. I'm burned out on screenplays now (Got screwed over on an option and it pissed me off). So, I"m going to try to get into the novel market instead, and the self publishing market is viable nowadays. Thanks to a few of the authors on the site for inspiring me to give it a go.

I haven't written any more on Unfinished Business/ I kind of hit a wall (mentally) with the next part of the book and haven't been able to surmount it. So, I started another work to try and jar it free. Unfortunately, it was so much fun to write that I couldn't stop.

Kisses,
Brianna