A Deperate Cry for Help

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Hey folks. Remember when you were all like, hey Krunch, what gives? When are you gonna finish Being Christina Chase?

And I was all like, look, I'm working on it. I have a lot of stuff to do. I mean there's laundry everwhere. And my dog needs a haircut. I'm on it. Any day now.

And you were all like, whatever Krunch. You're never getting it done.

And here we are. The last chapter is going out this weekend, which is the last opportunity to stick the landing or anger everyone who's wasted time reading everything so far. We'll see how it goes.

Anyhoo, I'm wrapping it up and shutting production down so I can take my leave from writing and focus on other things. Pursuant to this, I'm prepping the whole thing to be published as an ebook or a real book or I dunno. Whatever people want I guess.

The last sticking point is there's lots of errors. Things spelled wrong. Words in things losely called sentences that fail to impart rational meaning. So, if anyone has the time or inclination to make me feel bad about both my writing and proofreading skills, feel free to send me corrections on anything that has been posted.

I know some of my three fans do this without asking, and some have offered their services, but I've historically been too wrapped up in landry and dog grooming to take them seriously up on the offer. Now is the time. If you see anything off, shoot me a message. Once this thing is bookified, it's Krunch out.

Fork in it has been stuck

Comments

too wrapped up in landry

Seriously? He retired years ago!


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

See

See, this is what I'm talking about.

landry

That is just the "Fargo" way of stating laundry. It is all about how you say the vowels. I do love this story and I am glad you are finishing it.

Hugs,
Jenna From FL
Moderator/Editor
TopShelf BigCloset
It is a long road ahead but I will finally become who I should be.

Fargo?

North Dakota? They have an accent?


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Not an Accent,

...so much as a very poor public education system :)

Never let it be said that I don't enjoy the occasional delusion of grandeur

Tom Landry died years ago

AND won the Superbowl only ONCE in five tries despitwe all the millions the owner poured into the team. Nearly as sorry a record as Don Shula in Miami.

Krunch, if you do it right you can stick the landing AND tick everyone off as it will be so damned GOOD!

-- grin --

Have fun. I'm sure I will have fun reading.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

Never said

He was a good coach. But he is still highly regarded. Who am I to question another person's fetish, as long as it's legal. Not even yours, John!


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

At least

Krunch didn't put the laundry in the oven and dinner in the dryer like someone I know.

Paula

Seek freedom and become captive of your desires. Seek discipline and find your liberty.

The Coda
Chapterhouse: Dune

I wish I had time to do your work justice

BCC is an incredible story and deserves first-rate editing to iron out the occasional typo, and the very rare "irrationality." My RL obligations leave me enough time to read a bit, but little time for writing or editing.

As I've said before, if you publish, I want to know about it so I can have a copy of my own. Thank you for your wonderful work!

SuZie

Holly

Holly is a first rate editor :D And Seph is backing her up too.

But it's a lot of text and people are only human. We missed stuff.

Krunch, don't let the dog get

on the clean laundry. And are you giving the dog a grooming, or taking it to a pet groomer?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

actually Landry

Won two super bowls. Had the misfortune of running up against those steeler teams twice.

I see no problems

I just finished re-reading the story in the last month. I see no issues with it. You are imaginative writer, and Holly and Sephi are great wordsmyths.

G

Kindle would be good

Being somewhat lacking in eyesight, I use the huge font size a lot. And BCC is one of the best stories I've read

S.

will try...

I know there are some folks who have already read it through, but when I get a chance, I'll go back to chapter 1 and be on the lookout for possible errors.